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  • megpie12

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    I loved them and can't wait for the next one. :)
    May 13th, 2013 at 01:06am
  • bostonhooligan

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    Wow these are great! I loved Red and the last couple lines of it. Great job!!
    May 4th, 2013 at 01:58am
  • Jayess

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    Wow, I would have bitch-slapped Jordan so hard. But I agree with her mom, what was she thinking? She should have the self-respect to stay away from him.
    May 1st, 2013 at 09:47pm
  • heyJAYhey

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    Love love love these stories! Jordan's was absolutely great, and I really felt for Whitney at the end -- I'd totally read an intro to their relationship. You should definitely add Geno to the list of stories ;D
    May 1st, 2013 at 01:55am
  • danielle_12

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    I think Jordan's story was better than James'. I think this is because I love any story with the Staals in it but also because I'm a sucker for those like one true love stories. I would love to read a whole story based on Jordan and Whitney but I think it should be like both a prequel and a sequel. Very Happy
    May 1st, 2013 at 01:01am
  • tinydancer92

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    @ macastel
    Thank you so much! This is so kind of you! :)
    May 1st, 2013 at 12:53am
  • macastel

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    I'll be honest, I just waited for the Staal story, and waiting for the Sid story! (I suppose I'm lazy since the Neal shot isn't that long?! Haha I will get to it eventually, I am just helpless to Sid and Staal fics)

    I thoroughly enjoyed this Jordan one-shot! I love the drama you portrayed in the one shot, and I would happily read the back story of their love triangle! I would secretly wish that Whitney and Jordan got their happy ending eventually. I'll admit I suppose I'm not the biggest fan of one-shots, because if they were well written...I always want more! Which is in this case! I'd love to see an extension of this... great job, awesome drama and tension, well written!
    May 1st, 2013 at 12:50am
  • Crosby'sBabyGirl

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    I really like this!
    April 27th, 2013 at 05:11pm