Wow, I would have bitch-slapped Jordan so hard. But I agree with her mom, what was she thinking? She should have the self-respect to stay away from him.
Love love love these stories! Jordan's was absolutely great, and I really felt for Whitney at the end -- I'd totally read an intro to their relationship. You should definitely add Geno to the list of stories ;D
I think Jordan's story was better than James'. I think this is because I love any story with the Staals in it but also because I'm a sucker for those like one true love stories. I would love to read a whole story based on Jordan and Whitney but I think it should be like both a prequel and a sequel.
I'll be honest, I just waited for the Staal story, and waiting for the Sid story! (I suppose I'm lazy since the Neal shot isn't that long?! Haha I will get to it eventually, I am just helpless to Sid and Staal fics)
I thoroughly enjoyed this Jordan one-shot! I love the drama you portrayed in the one shot, and I would happily read the back story of their love triangle! I would secretly wish that Whitney and Jordan got their happy ending eventually. I'll admit I suppose I'm not the biggest fan of one-shots, because if they were well written...I always want more! Which is in this case! I'd love to see an extension of this... great job, awesome drama and tension, well written!