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  • tezza

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    It's so sad that there was no ending for this :(
    August 22nd, 2014 at 03:08pm
  • name1234

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    I really really miss this story. And it's killing me that I don't know how it ends. :(
    March 14th, 2014 at 05:16pm
  • name1234

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    I miss this story, update soon? (:
    September 26th, 2013 at 05:18pm
  • NaiveDove

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    I love this story so much, it's really good and I can't wait for you to update. Also, I wanna thank you so much because Eli has become the inspiration for my boy name(:
    September 10th, 2013 at 05:44pm
  • name1234

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    Come back and finish this!! It's soo good!! (:
    August 13th, 2013 at 07:39am
  • tezza

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    I've had so many issues going on I hadn't had time to read but now I've caught up and WOW. Just.. Wow hahaah that is all.
    July 27th, 2013 at 07:04am
  • SexyFairy

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    please hurry with the next chapter Smile
    July 13th, 2013 at 03:18am
  • cin

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    So really can't wait until the next chapter! I really liked the plot twist with the dealer taking part of the bet. I hope nothing super bad happens to Eli though...
    July 3rd, 2013 at 07:36am
  • name1234

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    Ahh you have to update! I need to know happens! I love this story sooo much!! <3
    June 19th, 2013 at 07:32pm
  • Strange Sort Of Evil

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    Here from Comment swap.

    Well from the title I really didn't know what to expect, after seeing the layout I was still none the wiser. I like your first chapter, it's very well written and hooked me straight away.
    You descriptions are excellent and your use of language is good.
    I read this full thing in one go so my eyes are hurting now, but it was worth it for sure! Smile
    June 7th, 2013 at 05:36pm
  • German13

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    *Comment Swap*
    First off, I really like your writing style! The dialogue flows nicely and there were only a few grammar errors that I saw! I think you could use your writing style to your advantage by writing something more unique! don't get me wrong, this story is great, but there are thousands of stories like this! I think you could write something really great if you brought your mind to it!
    May 31st, 2013 at 01:43am
  • name1234

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    Ahh I just read all of this and I love it!! I can't wait for more <3
    May 1st, 2013 at 04:51am
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Moree!! I love this so much D: I wanna find out what happens.
    April 30th, 2013 at 04:30am
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Still love this story nd I'm afraid what decision he'll come too but I can't wait to find out
    April 29th, 2013 at 06:47pm
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    This story is amazing, nd I hope you update soon. I comment every update, so get use to my username lol
    April 24th, 2013 at 05:30am
  • KaeBug

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    Love it! Update soon!!
    April 23rd, 2013 at 08:51pm
  • kshelton2011

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    I love it! :D 'yes Ellison. You're the master behind my first orgasm. Congratulations.' <- That is amazing! XDD
    April 23rd, 2013 at 02:11am
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Sexy ;o Love it<3 can't wait for more<33
    April 22nd, 2013 at 02:30am
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Sexy ;o Love it<3 can't wait for more<33
    April 22nd, 2013 at 02:30am
  • graphicromantics

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    You are forgiven. <3
    April 22nd, 2013 at 01:59am