Is It Worth It - Comments

Oh my god, this is getting soo soo god. I love it, I was so excited for the update, and let me tell you, it did not disappoint. Ahhhh, update soon :)

Well, James, quite frankly, you should be nervous...no matter what the case is.

Talon needs to find herself a new Penguin. Sorry but I think James is a bit of an airhead. This was fabulous, nonetheless. I hope you are able to get an update out soon :)

Dear God, James, you have no clue why Mario wants to talk to you. Did you somehow forget that you made a fool out of your wife (& yourself) by bringing your knocked up mistress into the locker room? What did he think management was going to think about one of his top 5 star players bringing their pregnant whore to a place where a reporter could have seen them at any time and basically made the whole team think he's an assface, ruining team chemistry? Did he expect Mario to shrug and say, "well, that happened"? I honestly do not feel sorry for him. You're sad your wife is pulling away from you, well no shit, Sherlock. If he didn't want this then he shouldn't have stuck his dick in another woman, or at least worn a fucking condom. And, in the shock of the century, Nathalie doesn't embrace him with open arms. Really a woman treats you like you take pleasure in killing puppies, acts perfectly normal to your wife, and just recently you humiliated your wife by bringing your mistress around. Here's a hint this talk involves Rebecca. I honestly think it's a nice sentiment for Talon to try and salvage her marriage but if she takes him back she's basically telling James cheat all you want because I'll come back. James though is finally realizing how much respect he is losing. I expect his teammates won't sing his praises or be too accepting of his behavior. Talon needs to leave and not come back if James begs because he doesn't get the I'm sorry it was a mistake card as cheating revokes that. I want to see more of Rebecca as if James is going to fuck up his marriage he needs to be involved in his kid's life and not half ass it. Update soon!

@ kakeaney
Hmmmm you think Talon's just sitting down and taking it? I think you will find soon that she may or may not stick around much longer..... **Oooops may have said too much there** hehe

I'm glad that your liking it though. I'm going to get an update out as soon as I can. Unfortunately my computer crashed & burned this past weekened and I'm trying to decide if in the next couple of weeks to get a new laptop or get the 1 I have already fixed.

So unfortunately for people who read my stories they may have to wait a couple of weeks for an update!!! Though I am hoping to make it to the library every now and than to maybe get an update out.

@ lovergirl5036
Oh My God, I literally just fell off of my couch laughing. That was too fucking precious. You go, girl!

But I just found this and James pisses me off. He needs to get his head out of his ass and see what he's doing. Plus, Talon shouldn't just sit down and take his shit. I can't wait until someone kicks his ass. But I actually like this so far :) update soon!

Just got around to commenting and I must say I already want to give James a tongue lashing. Because I find him insulting. He is the worst type of guy; one who wants to have just desserts. Let me explain, James wants to have the perks of a a single man- being able to have sex with any girl ready to drop her panties- yet wants the things that come with being a fateful husband- a loving wife to come home to, constant sex partner, and most importantly respect. The thing that pisses me off is he expects Talon to take the fact he decided to cheat and got his slut of the month pregnant like she found out he screwed up the laundry and just smile and take it. Because something is wrong here, he must either believe Talon's a gold digger in love with the idea of being married to an athlete thus not giving a fuck who he, well, fucks as long as he pays for he shopping sprees, or he actually thinks he is entitled to Talon ignoring the fact that she's going to see a child grow up that screams to all 'my husband cheated' for the rest of her life. Something gives me a feeling Talon might have a fertility issue and if so he must understand this is a punch in the gut. Since their wedding she has probably hoped to have a chance to be pregnant and have a baby, and now while she can't have that his whore d'jour can. I understand her insecurities, she loves/d him and stayed faithful to him during a rough patch. He didn't. Rebecca is a dumbass, that''s for sure. Yes, Sherlock, I'm sure your married baby daddy's parents would love to meet your pregnant self. But one thing I don't want, oddly, is for her to somehow be killed off. It's so cliche for the other parent of any children had by one part of the main couple but not the other to either die, flat out leave because they can't handle it, or turn out to be one of an alcoholic, drug addict, or any other similar disease. Because, to me at least, this is James getting off easy. Miraculously his mistress is gone and he can raise the baby with Talon as the pseudo mom and all is well. I want him to have to deal with his demons and co-parent with this idiot to show mistakes have consequences. He has humiliated his wife and acted like it's no big deal. When you cheat, your wife has every right to kick you out of the bed/room/house, his parents have every right to call him an asshole for cheating, and his teammates have every right to lose any and all respect for him. He's changed everyone's life so his needs to change to. And he should not be shocked or resentful when Talon isn't in love/ enthralled with his love child because she didn't want this and just because she's a woman doesn't mean she needs to love a child who signifies the destruction of her trust in her husband/marriage like her own. If she does then she truly is the bigger person and more forgiving then me, but if not I understand. He has given her an inferiority complex the size of South Africa and made her uncomfortable in her own marriage, which is not okay.
If the above didn't clearly state this, I'm 100% team Talon, but I hope she doesn't sink to his level as two wrongs don't make a right. Update soon!

God, I hope someone kicks his ass. How can he purport to be trying to work it out if his piece on the side is still hanging around? How can they work it out if he's still screwing around on his wife and flaunting his mistress and her pregnancy to his teammates, her friends? He's humiliated her so badly by bringing the new woman around and introducing her to them even if she wasn't coming. That's not a sign of trying to make it work.

Leave him, girl! You're worth more than that! He's not sorry he did it, he's only sorry he got caught. Leave his ass sooner, not later!

good good good, more more more!

Just found this story and I love it!!!!! Great job :)

Love this story so far! It's becoming one of my favorites!!!

This is really good. I like the plot but most of all I like the way you write your main character, she's in a difficult situation but she's not a victim and you don't ask the reader to pity her. I'm intrigued, I can't wait to see what you plan to do with this story. Great job!

so happy i found this story! can't wait for an update!!!

Oh...this is such a great story with a great plot! *subscribes*

:) That chapter was amazing. This is my favorite story ever

Well this is a different James Nral than we're used to seeing - I like it. Hopefully he can stop being an ass, obviously. Can't wait for an update!

Wow, I really love this so much. Update soon :)

This is amazing, and I L.O.V.E how sassy Talon is! :)

Love it! Update soon!

more more more!!!