Thanks for the mention! (-; Did you tag Green Day and Billie Joe Armstrong for this story? I don't see your work in the GD fan fiction section and I think you'd really benefit from having it there.
Thank You So Much, I did notice I needed to change some things but you gave me Even more ideas :D Now about Billie's deal with Penelope , That will be out pretty soon its actually a big surprise and will shock the hell out of you (; haha@ poison and blood.
I really enjoy this plot. I still wanna know what Billie's deal bout Penelope is! One thing, however, that you should look into is picking past or present tense and sticking with it. As of right now, it's of course understandable, you go back and forth rapidly. Making that change would change this story from good to great! That stuff really matters to a lot of readers! (-: