I Could Write It Better Than You Ever Felt It - Comments

@ Nanook
Thanks so much again!! :)

Aw, you're welcome! :)
Well, if you do choose to rewrite it, I'll probably read it again. Aha. I'd like to see how you change it plus I just love the plot line that much. ;)
And feel free to let me know if you post any other new stories! I'd be happy to check them out. :)

@ alltimelxws
Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it! I'm just starting to write a new ATL fic-not sure if it's gonna work out, but I was having writing withdrawals so I thought I'd give it a try! Thanks again for the comment!

dude dude dUde im crying this story was SO amazing i literally read it in an hour and a half... and im supposed to be writing a paper.... but im so glad i read this instead! alice and alex just like... fit, ya know?? i knew it from the second he told her he doesn't hate her, he just doesn't know her. and the ending, omgg it was so cute like even if it was sappy, it wasn't like the gross sappy that makes you wanna stop reading a story, it was the perfect amount! ugh i just can't express how much i adore this story. it's such an original concept, and you're a great writer, so it went perfectly! i honestly don't read much fan fiction, because they're all the same, cliche stories to me, (which is why i started writing my own, but this isn't about me lmao) but this is just brilliant. gaah i love this, and your writing, id love to see more from you!!!

@ Nanook
Thank you so much!! I went back and re-read most of this story not too long ago and I'd have to agree with how corny some parts are, haha, a part of me really wants to rewrite this because since I've ended it I've had so many more ideas. A lot of chapters seem rushed and confusing to me now, so I'm actually really flattered when people tell me how much they enjoyed it! Thanks so much again, I really can't believe how many people enjoyed this and that people are still finding it and reading! And your comment just made my day! I've been contemplating posting another ATL fic soon, but we shall see. :)

Oh, and I'd also like to say, I just randomly found this today. And I FINISHED IT, ALL, IN ONE SITTING. THAT'S HOW GOOD IT WAS. ;)
Sorry I wasn't around to comment when you were actually updating, though. I would have given more feedback throughout. But I guess these two comments will have to suffice.

But Alex was right, him and I were 'exactly right', and I was beginning to realize that I didn't need to plan out and script my future for it to be perfect anymore.
Because it already was.
May I just start out this comment by saying, you have such a way with words. :')
I loved this. This story... is seriously the dream of any fan-fiction writer out there. LMAO. Like, seriously, just considering the whole plot, it really is. But with this story specifically, any ATL writer's dream. ;)
As cliché as the ending kind of was, I really liked it. Because I'm a sap for happy endings too.
This is probably the most original plot I've actually seen for an ATL fan fic. I actually haven't seen any one write with this same idea in mind, so you are definitely creative. I think we've all thought about what would happen if any of our stories actually happened but we never thought to actually WRITE about it. Or if someone else has, I can imagine because of it being a somewhat difficult task. Because this plot definitely didn't seem too easy to write for. So brav-a! As they say in the theatre. XD Seriously, though, I applaud you.
But even though it was corny at times I still felt you did it as just the right moments. I was definitely on the edge of my seat, wondering what would happen next at certain points, so you definitely kept it interesting! :) I just really enjoyed this. Gah, it was so cute. :)
You should definitely keep writing! I really hope you do. You're a great writer!
AMAZING job! :D

@ chelsearae113
Thank you!!! :)

i absolutely loved this so much
i loved the ending the most, it was fucking majestic
thank you so much

I love this story! Ughhh!

@ Ricky.Horror
Thanks!!

This story is so amazing. I love it. :)

You tease me too much woman. Like I've said before this story is amazing in every way. You have a way of telling stories that capture my attention in every way. You have a gift don't let it go. Message me we should get together and write our own story it would be great. My offer still stands, I know gold when I see it. Keep it up!

just putting it out there that all of these comments are awesome, thank you guys so much!

this is so amazing i cant even. Nope. I cant

@ livelaughlove_xo @ Jack Barakitty
haha I like the enthusiasm! Thanks for reading, update coming soon!

Omfg I'm screaming. I hope Alice & Alex actually still know each other afterwards. Omgomgomg.

AH CLIFF HANGER I MUST KNOW

@ stylish zebras x
It's no problem! It did, thank you. It's not a bad thing love, not in the slightest.
I'm glad to hear! I'll be waiting patiently

@ earthtoamy
Thanks so much!! & I hope your fitness test went ok, sorry this story was a distraction haha. I'll be updating very soon!