I Could Write It Better Than You Ever Felt It - Comments

  • EzioAuditore

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    Commet swap!
    Truth be told, this isn't my thing at all. But I did read the first two chapters.
    Even if it's not my cup of tea, I still want to let you know that I think this idea is quite great, and funny, too. I love the idea of having her writing become true, I personally haven't read that anywhere before. Even if I'm curious now as to know why Alex is freaking out so much but everyone else knows Alice, I just don't feel the story is for me. It's nothing against the story, just personal taste. Keep this up, I bet a lot of people really like it. One thing I do wanna mention is that I miss some details. Your writing isn't bad at all, but a few more details would make it seem less rushed, more realistic and give better insight to what's going on.
    August 4th, 2013 at 11:29am
  • ToxicxDancefloor

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    Bring Alex back into Alice's life. They were so falling for each other. I love this story so much.
    August 1st, 2013 at 05:18pm
  • Fettishforyou1

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    @ stylish zebras x
    yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
    August 1st, 2013 at 12:47am
  • musicdoe

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    Oh good thank god
    July 31st, 2013 at 07:56pm
  • stylish zebras x

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    @ Fettishforyou1
    It's soooo not over!
    July 31st, 2013 at 07:07pm
  • stylish zebras x

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    @ Larissamastmann
    No!
    July 31st, 2013 at 07:06pm
  • Fettishforyou1

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    please don't say it's over!!!!!!!!! LIFE JUICE! I NEED IT!! :'(
    July 31st, 2013 at 03:40pm
  • musicdoe

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    Is this story over?):
    July 31st, 2013 at 01:12pm
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    @ Isn't That Kinky?
    Thank you so much! :)
    July 31st, 2013 at 10:18am
  • Isn't That Kinky?

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    I have to say, this is the first good story I've found on here in a very long time. And it's a fan-fic! It actually did make me laugh aloud. I am very, very impressed :)
    July 31st, 2013 at 10:15am
  • stylish zebras x

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    @ Fettishforyou1
    Bahaha you win best comment! I'll be updating soon!
    July 26th, 2013 at 06:55pm
  • Fettishforyou1

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    MORE PLEASE! I NEED IT, IT IS MY LIFE JUICE!!!!
    July 26th, 2013 at 03:48pm
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    @ hannahdollx
    Thank you so much!
    July 21st, 2013 at 08:10am
  • Hannahdoll

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    I am in absolute love with this story. I have never read anything like it. :)
    July 21st, 2013 at 06:52am
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    @ Ella4444
    Thank you so much!! That really means a lot, I've been having this fear that this story is getting unoriginal and boring as it goes on but your comment just made me feel better, haha. :)
    July 18th, 2013 at 06:09am
  • Ella4444

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    This is literally the best thing I've ever read omfg it's so original I love it please update soon I'm dying here <3
    July 18th, 2013 at 04:41am
  • kalianne

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    @ stylish zebras x
    welcome
    July 17th, 2013 at 08:45am
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    @ kalianne
    Thanks!
    July 17th, 2013 at 08:24am
  • kalianne

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    Love it!
    July 17th, 2013 at 08:11am
  • musicdoe

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    I think you should keep it all here d:
    Great story by the way.
    July 1st, 2013 at 06:27am