August 4th, 2013 at 11:29am
I Could Write It Better Than You Ever Felt It - Comments
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Bring Alex back into Alice's life. They were so falling for each other. I love this story so much.August 1st, 2013 at 05:18pm
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@ stylish zebras x
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!August 1st, 2013 at 12:47am -
Oh good thank godJuly 31st, 2013 at 07:56pm
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@ Fettishforyou1
It's soooo not over!July 31st, 2013 at 07:07pm -
@ Larissamastmann
No!July 31st, 2013 at 07:06pm -
please don't say it's over!!!!!!!!! LIFE JUICE! I NEED IT!! :'(July 31st, 2013 at 03:40pm
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Is this story over?):July 31st, 2013 at 01:12pm
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@ Isn't That Kinky?
Thank you so much! :)July 31st, 2013 at 10:18am -
I have to say, this is the first good story I've found on here in a very long time. And it's a fan-fic! It actually did make me laugh aloud. I am very, very impressed :)July 31st, 2013 at 10:15am
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@ Fettishforyou1
Bahaha you win best comment! I'll be updating soon!July 26th, 2013 at 06:55pm -
MORE PLEASE! I NEED IT, IT IS MY LIFE JUICE!!!!July 26th, 2013 at 03:48pm
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@ hannahdollx
Thank you so much!July 21st, 2013 at 08:10am -
I am in absolute love with this story. I have never read anything like it. :)July 21st, 2013 at 06:52am
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@ Ella4444
Thank you so much!! That really means a lot, I've been having this fear that this story is getting unoriginal and boring as it goes on but your comment just made me feel better, haha. :)July 18th, 2013 at 06:09am -
This is literally the best thing I've ever read omfg it's so original I love it please update soon I'm dying here <3July 18th, 2013 at 04:41am
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@ stylish zebras x
welcomeJuly 17th, 2013 at 08:45am -
@ kalianne
Thanks!July 17th, 2013 at 08:24am -
Love it!July 17th, 2013 at 08:11am
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I think you should keep it all here d:
Great story by the way.July 1st, 2013 at 06:27am
Truth be told, this isn't my thing at all. But I did read the first two chapters.
Even if it's not my cup of tea, I still want to let you know that I think this idea is quite great, and funny, too. I love the idea of having her writing become true, I personally haven't read that anywhere before. Even if I'm curious now as to know why Alex is freaking out so much but everyone else knows Alice, I just don't feel the story is for me. It's nothing against the story, just personal taste. Keep this up, I bet a lot of people really like it. One thing I do wanna mention is that I miss some details. Your writing isn't bad at all, but a few more details would make it seem less rushed, more realistic and give better insight to what's going on.