Storms in Utopia - Comments

  • dreamsinthedaylight

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    Omg, I just found Chasing Imagination about five days ago, and I havent been able to stop reading since. All of it is just so well written and the overall plot and story line is just amazing to say the least. I love how the separate stories are all interwoven and come together. Im really hoping for an update soon Mr. Green
    December 8th, 2013 at 11:06pm
  • CatchingDreams

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    Just came back on here today to see what's going on - would love to see an update sometime!! :)
    December 6th, 2013 at 07:35pm
  • bashful

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    Wow, I haven't been around for like a month! It was super cool to come back and find that there were some more chapters to read. I think really I should just say how completely awesome it is how in-depth this universe that you're making is. Like, in the latest chapter, all the things with the technology and weaponry - it's just such a smart idea and it's really realistic that someone in the government/a position of power is on their side because it's never a case of 'all bad guys to the government on the left, all good guys to the Dreamer bases on the right', you know? And I really liked the dynamic between all of these guys; it was really interesting to read and also quite funny, seeing whether all the different personalities clash or not. I look forward to the next chapters!
    May 20th, 2013 at 05:59pm
  • xxdanie

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    Long chapters are definitely not a bad thing.
    May 3rd, 2013 at 03:52pm
  • xXCyanideTearsXx

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    Ahh, I'm only on chapter five, but I'm really enjoying book four already! I love your style of writing. It's nice to see/read how everyone reacts with one another in this book, and how personalities can clash.
    But I must admit I'm kinda disappointed that you said in your author's note that the first part of the book will be mainly centred around Hurricane and Arjan. Mostly because I'm a little bit in love with Casper (and Amy) and am soo glad they're back; I wanted to read a bit more about them. Still, I'm sure whoever's POV you write from, it'll be interesting. =)
    April 30th, 2013 at 02:10am
  • HannaLiisa

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    I can't believe that it's book four already! It feels like I just started reading Martyr's Run.
    So far it seems amazing and I'm sure it will continue the same way. Even the introduction made me want to read the whole thing so bad and I'm sure I'm not the only one:D And I liked the prequel, I think it was a nice solution to show how regular people feel and how they see the Dreamers. When Simeon met Hurricane, gosh it was awesome! I loved, well, everything :)
    April 26th, 2013 at 04:47pm
  • bashful

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    I feel all jittery with anticipation! It looks like things are getting pretty serious with the Dreamers. Also I thought I should say that I think your management of so many different characters (and mini-plots I suppose) is really good so far.
    April 15th, 2013 at 06:09pm
  • xxdanie

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    I'm so excited about this story! Even though it's focusing mostly on Hurricane and Arjan so far, everyone's back together and revolution is in the air! Keep it up; I can't wait for more.
    April 14th, 2013 at 04:38pm
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    Dear god, everyone's here! I think I'm gonna need a moment because, like, everyone is here. Together. And now everything is getting really super interlinked and stuff and complex series which are all in the same universe and previous stories in the series have impact and stuff (wow bad explanation I'm sorry) are like my kryptonite. I am so, so excited to see where this story goes! On a more constructive not (I suppose not really but still) I really liked the prologue and it was interesting too see how your style can differ for effect. Also, I think the timing stuff was pretty clear in the narrative, for me at least.
    April 9th, 2013 at 03:01pm