Demons, They Follow Me. - Comments

  • shortygirl

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    I still really like this. Please update soon
    April 21st, 2015 at 12:39am
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    There's a few grammar and spelling errors in your chapters. :( But other then that I REALLY REALLY like this story, it's pretty good.
    May 16th, 2013 at 01:51am
  • Heaven_syn_gates

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    wow that was great update soon
    May 11th, 2013 at 04:30am
  • shortygirl

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    Don't stop there!! It was getting good!
    I loved his mom's reaction lol
    Please update soon
    May 11th, 2013 at 04:09am
  • YourLoveIsMyLifeline

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    Amazing story, please update soon :D
    April 30th, 2013 at 03:53pm
  • xShadows

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    This is amazing! Aviana is such a bad ass and I love it :) Keep updating!
    April 20th, 2013 at 05:57pm
  • shortygirl

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    Loved the update
    April 20th, 2013 at 05:37am
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    Hmm I think he has a twin that he doesn't know about. This should be intersting.
    April 17th, 2013 at 05:52am
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    I'm liking this so far but how does Zacky not know that his sister is working for the gang?
    April 17th, 2013 at 01:09am