Beautiful With You - Comments

Oh my god, this was the most adorable thing ever. I think you should turn this into a short story.

This is really good! This could definitely turn into a short story if you wanted it to :)

Aw, Suttsy. This story really rang true with me, especially today of all days. (I just found out that a friend of mine has very recent scars.)

I liked your characters and her sort of shyness was endearing, as was his caring attitude towards her. It was a nice length and the layout looked nice.

Thanks again for entering!

@ parisegirl09
Thank you sweetie :D Aww that's sad to hear but if you ever need a friend, my inbox is always open <3

Awww that's so cute! And I can relate to it, I remember when my boyfriend found out about my scars. He didn't take it as well as Brandon. But I really love this and You could turn it into a short story!