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  • shadowz1995

    shadowz1995 (100)

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    Yeah those were just little typos or moments where i got distracted and im too lazy to go back and fix it >.< but thank you hahaha! Oh by the way I tried! But the layout wont stay!
    May 3rd, 2013 at 11:34pm
  • A Decade in the Sun

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    I can't describe how much I love this! I've never read a zombie story before, this is really good! I love the way you interact with the reader. The summary was brilliant and really got me. I think your grammar needs a little work, like in the last chapter you confused 'Right' for 'Write'. I think maybe a bloody layout would be pretty awesome too, just to add to the Zombie theme :)
    April 27th, 2013 at 12:54pm
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