The Governor's Wish - Comments

  • RaeStardust.

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    Oooh, this was...interesting to read, really. I love TWD but all I've seen are fan fics about Rick or Daryl, but you my dear have written this amazingly well. The only thing that stuck out to me was this:
    Waking up this morning was one of the most pleasant things the Governor had done in a good long time.
    I feel as if the word "good" shouldn't be in there, but that's just me. It sounded a bit odd to read. Either way though, this was..just great. I loved it. The way you wrote it was disgusting yet beautiful. I could picture everything in my mind, it seemed as if this should have been a part of TWD. You've done a great job.
    April 27th, 2013 at 08:46pm
  • eraserhead.

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    I'm not even gonna lie, I was not prepared for this, but it definitely kept me interested (and pretty nauseous), so props for that.
    Well written, definitely villainous. It's going to be hard to top this on an evil scale.
    April 26th, 2013 at 06:40am