Devil - Comments

I don't know why but this one made me think of the song Dance with the Devil. The words the devil spoke come out so beautifully while giving a nice mysterious air to the story, so nice.

I like your detailed descriptions and the scenes that unfolded before our eyes. Great use of imagery and the words that were spoken from the devil's lips...just amazing. The decriptions about the creature before her and the deal...It was just, ugh....fucking amazing. The summary, ‘’A deal with the devil is sealed once the devil is summoned. A deal with a human is sealed when the devil leaves his mark…and a deal always remains a deal.’' which was used and at the end of the chapter drew me in right away and the ending was fabulous. Well done.