Purge - Comments

Woah. POWERFUL. Maybe you should put a trigger warning on this, btw.

I think this is really upsetting. It's beautifully written and reads so poetically, I really like it but I feel so disturbed after reading this. It's not as though I haven't read about things like this or heard about it but it's just your words came off so powerful to me. The repetitiveness of some of the lines, the worry it sounded like in the eleventh line that I could honestly see someone in this situation feeling. I guess I have really mixed emotions about this piece, I mean it's absolutely astonishing but sometimes maybe things are just too well written. (But I think that's still a good thing.) You did really well with this piece.