June 14th, 2013 at 09:10am
@ Thatmom
Thanks for the support. I am hoping you might be willing to answer a couple of questions for me? Does Hairy the dog's perspective work? Can you tell which character is speaking in the short segments? I am interested in an objective opinion.~ BG
Telling the story from different points of view does allow the reader to see things from many perspectives - to really get into the characters' heads. I especially am enjoying how you are writing Taylor - very realistic!
But the last little bit of this chapter was hard to read - I can still see the teeth flying out of Sid's mouth!!