Pareidolia -- The Story of the Mad Hatter - Comments

  • Demon-Lord-Ghirahim

    Demon-Lord-Ghirahim (100)

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    @ kota is alright.
    it was more or less a quick thing I thought of, and I know it could have been better.

    Pareidolia is seeing images that aren't really there such as a house that looks like it has a face, or a cloud that looks like a cat. But to an extreme where one actually believes these images do exist and are intractable.
    July 28th, 2013 at 12:34am
  • lumy.

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    This is such an interesting story. I've always found the Mad Hatter rather intriguing. What does Pareidolia mean? It sounds like it could be a disease.

    I enjoy your writing style. However, I feel like maybe you could benefit from using a wider variety of words. Things like "imaginary" seemed a bit overused, in my opinion. I'm not trying to sound rude by any means, just offering a suggestion. But other than that, this was a fantastic story. I love the idea of it and the insight into the mind of the Mad Hatter.

    Haha, I actually have a miniature version of his hat! It makes me happy.
    July 2nd, 2013 at 11:42pm