I Swear I Didn't Mean To - Comments

Thanks I guess..?
Gerard isn't suppose to be a creepy rapier. He has sexomnia you should look it up and read more about it. And Frank doesn't really trust Gerard on a personal level they just have a mutual friend who in a way brings them together. I'm not a detailed expert and my English is iffy. I do know it could have been much better but it is how it is and I think it was still heartbreaking.
Your comment kind of made me sad.

@ syra

Wow Frank is an idiot. I dunno man, why would you just...? Trust someone you hardly know? Maybe I didn't like, read it well enough, but it just felt off. Gerard didn't seem like a creep rapist and hardly showed any desire for Frank (other than the "nice neck" which made me smile cos I could really picture high!Gerard saying some shit like that) and ugh, I did not see that coming and I wish the detailing was a little more evident and the pacing was slower. This has a lot of potential of being an awesome heartbreaking story, but I don't think it had enough suspense/buildup/creep factor for it to really strike my fancy. So yeah. Good idea, work a little on the crescendo to the climax. :) Keep writing.

It's so sad... =( A happier sequel?

great story! i wasnt expecting that ending, but i loved it!
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I feel so bad for Frankie... Please make a sequel!

@ FrankieNightmareIero

@ Zombiewalk

thank you a lot for the comments you two :D

Love it please update soon :)

Love it already! I am so excited about this!

Love it already! I am so excited about this!