Machine - Comments

Very intriguing intro. I can't wait to read the rest of it.

This is beautiful! You're such a great writer. I feel every emotion and Jongin's pain... It's simply beautiful. ^^

Sorry that it's taken so long for me to get around to commenting on entries! -_-
First of all, you got me right in the feels as soon as I saw Sekai because they are one of my top otps. I was actually kinda glad you went the slash route and not the hetero route for the story. I thought that you represented the song really well through your writing--which is amazing. You also write very tasteful and not cringe-worthy smut which is also a bit A+. I felt so bad for Jongin omg I just want to hug him and also kick Sehun. Overall, I just really liked this a lot!