Kate - Comments

I can't tell you how much I love this story already but I fucking love it. Please update soon!

i adore this layout so much and the banner makes me feel like the main character of this story is badass.

The prologue/first chapter (whatever you'd like to call it) is PERFECT. The way you described a very girl, glam girl and then how she became this sort of dark, grungey girl; i really like how you described both parts of Kate. Also, having the first chapter be short is really good to entice the reader :D!

Oh yay, her mother is a fake bitch; how nice. I could never deal with someone as prissy as Jennifer Montgomery, I'd die; especially if it was my own mother dear Lord poor Kate. I'm curious as to how short Katie cut her hair, I think you should've been more descriptive on that.

Dang, Carter is tall. It's weird how everyone, including her teacher, is treating Kate a lot different because of a style change. PEOPLE ARE SO IGNORANT.

Overall, you are honestly such a great writer and this story is flawless.

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Your layout is beautiful, the writing is a bit small for my liking, but never the less, it's gorgeous. You have managed to get the perfect balance of description and non descriptive parts in this. I didn't find myself bored while you were going into detail with things, which I do in a lot of stories. I think this is very good, looking forward to more.

Oh my Lord, this is so good! I absolutely adore your writing style and it just makes me want to read more. You have the perfect balance of description and activity as to not bore the reader. It's wonderful, and I'm so glad you asked me to rec/comment on this!

Love, love, love it! Cannot wait to read more, love!