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  • Twinny

    Twinny (100)

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    I absolutely ADORE your story so far! I've been looking for a good The Host fanfic and yours is fantastic :) update soon, please!!

    -Elsie :)
    August 17th, 2013 at 08:55am
  • Red Guitar

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    This is so beautiful <3

    Is wanda supposed to be dead here? Because if she is OMG.

    I really love how you make us feel that Ian is writing this for his own. I can totally imagine him writing this in the mountain with a small book and a pen just thinking up words to describe her.

    And the way you make this short makes me think that, "yes, this is the kind of things that Ian would write." Straight and to the point, it makes me feel that because he has all these feelings for her its a struggle to put them into words and in the end he gave up trying, just like how he feels like when he has to let Wanda go.

    THIS IS VERY PEFECT. Please please please continue. I beg you. Just make a few more Ian writing to himself. and maybe add the scenery of where he is writing, that would be so awesome :)
    May 11th, 2013 at 06:47pm