Eoin - Comments

Oh my god I'm crying. This is so lovely. The thing that drew me in was the character Wyatt, because I have a love interest named so. I love Eoin with his mysterious disappearances (the fact that you never explained why heightened my love for it) and I adore the fact that these two love each other so much that despite the mistrust they stick together. All together, I'm so impressed and this is probably my new favorite piece. Good job, darlin.

Well this was nothing short of fantastic, haha. Definitely got the whole emotional turmoil heartbreak tears and agony thing down pat as I am now sitting here feeling as I have just endured a hurricane of a relationship that has taken a great emotional toll on me all in the ten minutes of me reading this. Which is definitely a good thing, haha.

I'm really digging the whole stream-of-consciousness thought process approach that you have with the starts and stops and parenthesis that really emphasize the characterization and it's all really human and I really like that. How it's very conversational with the pauses and italics and I like that it makes me feel... closer to to Wyatt? Which is weird to say but definitely yeah closer. In a totally good way. I love the run-on sentences and the whole frazzled and confused way that it all comes together because I feel like those are probably what Wyatt's feeling. Except not frazzled as more emotionally devastated and distraught, haha, but that you definitely convey. Also I really, really like the whole parenthesis thing, I haven't seen it often in writing but I love what it adds to it as a sort of afterthought but really important ones that I really liked.

I loved the "like if he avoids Wyatt's eyes long enough he'll stop trying to search for answers in them". It may just very be my favourite line of this entire piece because it's perfect.

(Because a lot can change in four days. But even more can change in five months)

That also made me happy, I just really like this piece. It's really emotional but you execute it really well and I just feel things for Eoin and Wyatt and that's just the best because I love feeling things. The ending was just super adorable and I was so happy like aww thank you I am such a sucker for happy endings. c:

GOOD GOD TRACY. This is so painful... like, so painful. Why do you hurt me so? But in all honesty, you are one of the writers that I look up to. And some how you have me reading slash, which I have never read. So, thank you and at the same time, congrats I guess?

Couples like this frustrate the hell out of me because I know that their relationship is so destructive and at the same time, I can't stop hurting when it doesn't go right. And this basically encapsulates this.

It's beautiful, tragic, and painful.

I don't like Eoin and Wyatt needs to grow up.
So they're basically perfect for each other

Your descriptions and tiny gestures are as polished and poignant as ever.

And of course, your ability to make me feel things never falters either.

Perfection.

holy poop. this was so beautiful, and real and wow.
I love your writing style so goddamn much

Shit, I wanna know where Eoin goes, like really badly. Putting that aside. It was beautiful. I found myself hanging on every word and I got really mad when he just let him back in after five months! I've never been in love before, but if people say time heals all wounds, I would've thought five mouths were long enough to fall out of love. FIVE FUCKING MOUTHS! But I digress. It was a joy to read.

This is so beautiful you're gonna wipe the floor with everyone. THE CONCRETE FLOOR OH GOD, IT'S SO LOVELY.

Wyatt couldn’t count the number of times that Eoin snuck out in the middle of the night, came back days, weeks later, with an apology that had more holes in it than truth

What, how do you do this I want to do this

and then THIS

So this time. This time he holds a little tighter, struggles when Eoin tries to push him away, tries to let him go.

I can seriously feel how much Wyatt wants him to stay but he can't make him stay and the longing just BLEEDS ALL OVER ME.

A lot can change in four days,

You kill me. This is me. Dying.

This time Wyatt breaks the kiss, but keeps his fingers grasped in the softsoft fabric of Eoin’s jacket.

WYATT. I can just feel it. Did I tell you I can feel it already because I can.

“’ll see you soon,” Eoin says, and there’s conviction in his tone, a grin playing at his cheeks, and he’s just so beautiful, so wrong, and God, Wyatt just, he just…

What is he doing he's just going to leave Wyatt there, what is he even going for? And Wyatt isn't going to just leave him because he's so beautiful I'm gonna die

"Christ, I’ll miss you," Wyatt whispers, and it’s really fucking honest, even though it was an accident
That might be my favorite thing that you've ever written

They’ve never. It was never --

It was never supposed to be this, and Wyatt should have known better.

Wyatt thought he fucking knew better.

But he can't help it because he's in lurve oh jesus I can't

"Idiot," he mutters to himself, hands clenched tightly around a pair of stained socks. "You fucking idiot."
I'm just so sad right now

Wyatt's job takes everything out of him and Eoin doesn't call and he becomes so unhappy sometimes he can't stop the longing, the embarrassment, from seeping into his marrow, from making him... making him sick and tired and lonely

He's just so unhappy I can feel it I can feel it

It's a lone wolf and it's so fucking poetic and so fucking stupid he can't even look at it without wanting to cringe.
DYING

"Tell me why you came back," Wyatt says, because he's too fucking scared of what he'll say if he asks him why he goes.
I THINK THIS IS MY FAVORITE THING? LIKE THE WHOLE THING. I THINK IT'S MY FAVORITE.


"I..." Eoin pauses, contemplates his hand in a way that Wyatt suspects is to curb the reason he has to clear his throat again. "I need you."

DEATH IS UPON ME THE FEELS ARE TOO BIG FOR MY BODY


He doesn’t want him to leave again. (And he knows he’ll welcome him back if he does.)

And that’s enough, Wyatt thinks. It has to be.

How? HOW?