I love the way you write, everything flows and you're very descriptive as I can almost see the settings in my head. Eilidh is a beautiful name! I really like flashbacks so I loved chapter 2, it gave me an insight into the character. i was a creative way of letting us know her past. I love the end of chapter 3, it was amazing!!! I'm commenting as I read and I really like Benjamin, he seems really sweet! The last line of chapter 5 kind of freaked me out, what if he is stalking her! :-0!!! I love this story, please update soon xxx
September 2nd, 2013 at 04:01pm