Scrapbook Memories - Comments

Ouw it's so sad :( This is such a great story though! You've successfully wrote this in the most perfect way!

I usually don't like to read sad fics, but this was AMAZING within its sadness because you also left an element of mystery. I loved it

@ Wynnie Shawn
Haha, I'm a complete Harry girl so I understand, because Harry stories are pretty much all I read. But all in all thank you SO much! I didn't even realize I put the fingered part, that's so awkward! XD And would you mind if I actually use the amnesia idea. I've been wanting to make this a multi-chapter, but the amnesia idea gave me the perfect idea for it!

Aw! That was so sad! You are amazingly talented! I don't even usually read Harry fics, I'm more of a Louis girls but this was absolutely phenomenal! I really like how at the end you didn't give a positive answer to whether Anna was dead or not. I hope not! They sound perfect for each other and even though I know that it's just a one-shot, I want her to wake up and be together. Forever.

You should make this into a multi chapter! It would be interesting, especially if once Anna woke up, she had brain damage and didn't remember who Harry was and all they had left was the scrapbook to help bring back her memories. I don't know, I'm obsessed with amnesia after I watched the vow.

But lol, this is really random but I couldn't help but laugh because on one of your sentences, it said 'he unconsciously fingered the hole' or something like that but my dirty mind went to work and I found light in the whole sad, depressing thing.

Anyway, this almost made me cry and I just wanted to die right there! It was soooo sad! You're a naturally great author and I hope you write more because you have ridiculous amounts of talent and could definitely make it as an author.

niiiiiiiiiiiiiicccccccccccceeeeeeeeee

Aw, that was excellently written, but very sad. Having a love in a coma is one thing, but having them die is another. I did like how you explained the love he had for her through pictures. That's an interesting way of doing it, whether that was the intent or not.

I've never read a Harry Styles story before, and hardly even know who the man is but with this short one shot I didn't have to know. I like this onsie. :)

@ BeccaVengeance
Oh, I forgot to name her Anna-Beth, I was so scatter brained at the moment. Thanks for the comment! I'll make sure to fix the name confusion :)

I really did love this, but I'll admit-- the ending totally broke my heart! It was well executed and left me wondering which can be a great thing (and in this case it is!)

The one thing I must mention, which admittedly left me a bit confused, in the beginning it's Darcy who is laying in the hospital bed and Darcy whom Harry greets.