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  • Chicago-Kid

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    Okey, I get it now. So ossum! :)
    May 23rd, 2013 at 10:04am
  • darkaly

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    @ kittydu
    Haha, sorry I just noticed that I put the coding around the 'text here' wow
    And you're welcome for the comment c:
    May 23rd, 2013 at 12:45am
  • kittydu

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    oh wait, I already figure it out .......Now I feel dumb xD
    May 23rd, 2013 at 12:39am
  • kittydu

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    @ darkaly
    hi!! Thank you for comment!! I am really bad at codes xD I tried but nothing I guess I am doing something wrong, the worst thing is that I actually need it because in the last chapter my main character is thinking a few things and I still don't know how to use it Sad
    May 23rd, 2013 at 12:32am
  • darkaly

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    Oh, nevermind I just read the note about it.
    They coding for italics is text here
    May 23rd, 2013 at 12:11am
  • darkaly

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    It's good so far.
    Just curious, what's
    <i>If it is that easy why don't you do it</i>
    I bolded them just so you'd know what I was talking about. Are they ( the letters and symbols) suppose to be there or were they expected to be something out of html coding...
    May 23rd, 2013 at 12:09am
  • kittydu

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    hello!! Thank you so much for your review! I was actually thinking I wasn't good at first person xD I changed to third person because I thought that there are details that the main character can't see and using the third person would help the reader to see those small details. But my muse is crazy so who knows maybe I start to write in first person again Wink

    Thank you so much for review! Mr. Green
    May 22nd, 2013 at 07:19pm
  • Chicago-Kid

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    I liked it better when this was in first person, I think you're better at writing in that way. I love where this story is going, keep on with it :)
    May 21st, 2013 at 01:32am