Your insights were absolutely precise. Having to have written this story, it seems like you can empathize with just anyone because really, we all have thoughts like these. Good job! :)
I love this. I really do. And right now, I'm kind of speechless. It was written beautifully. You've more or less written down the pros and cons of taking your own life. I know some of us all feel like giving up but then something stops us. Family, friends, love, hope...
Anyway, love this piece. Thank you for joining my contest! :)
This was really good. The way everything is described and the bath scene was perfect because I felt like I was there and I could imagine everything she was going through. Really awesome job on this!