The Girl Code - Comments

  • Halloweenlover

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    Haha! I love this! It's very good! I like the humor, and the dialogue! It's golden! Well, keep on writing, Chica! Lol! XD
    May 24th, 2013 at 03:22am
  • alison.wonderland

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    @ PinkLady1216
    Thank you so much!
    May 15th, 2013 at 08:11pm
  • PinkLady1216

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    Oh, sweet, first comment. Already feeling a bit of drama, though the main character seems to be a little weak while everyone else has a clear-cut personality. Just a little constructive criticism, hun. Otherwise, pretty good for a first chapter. Keep working hard! Very Happy
    May 15th, 2013 at 07:59pm