This was really gorgeous. The descriptions were so intense and lovely, you really showed what an abusive relationship is like in a small amount of words. I love when drabbles are written without and dialouge and this is the perfect example of why. I really liked the fact that it felt like there was a rhythm to the writing, it made everything flow really nicely. I could feel all of the emotion that you put into it, you wrote it so well. The last sentence was my favourite, it tied everything together perfectly and was really impactful.
But yes, amazing job, I really, really enjoyed this
Wow, this was fantastic. I feel like this was the epitome of what project alice. was looking for in her contest. You did an excellent job conveying all of the emotions the girl was feeling, making it a very emotional read. I particularly loved the end. " I left a blank note on my side of the bed, because it said more than I could ever manage to stutter out." Gah, chills! <3
But yes, amazing job, I really, really enjoyed this