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  • rosamarie

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    This has been a great story! I just spent the last hour reading it. I was wondering about the chapter titles but then you explained XD It's been great reading something written by a fellow band nerd too! Arms I'm personally a clarinet. My band has about 150 students, and for concert season we have Symphonic band and Concert band (2nd band technically) We're an all superior band, and I thought it was interesting to read about another band. Luckily though, our band camp is one week for regular marchers (aka, not drumline or flag) and we go from 8 to 10:30 outside and then have a lunch break before working inside from 11:30 to 1.

    Gah, I need to stop talking now XD Anyway, this was such an amazing story! Sorry about my longwinded paragraph about band.... I am a true band nerd <3
    August 2nd, 2013 at 07:15pm
  • fiction246

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    This was absolutely beautiful!!! I loved it :) Ozzy is so sweet!!! <3
    June 29th, 2013 at 12:11pm
  • xXeternallyyoursXx

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    Loved this story! The characters were super original compared to a lot of the stories I've read recently. Also, I love how music played a role in this, possibly because I'm a bit of a band nerd. Still, I think that whole theme put against the fact that Aria is deaf was quite wonderful. Smile
    June 29th, 2013 at 09:18am
  • NaiveDove

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    I just found this and it's so good!!! I really wanna know why that girl hates her...can't wait for more.
    June 28th, 2013 at 04:15pm
  • resplendently

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    YAY FOR ARIA AND HER MIDDLE FINGER. YAY FOR HER AND OZZY. MELISSA IS A BITCH.
    June 28th, 2013 at 04:28am
  • AshyMandy

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    I really like this story. I'm actually near deaf 80 %. This is the first story with a deaf character i've read since losing my hearing. It's really good.
    June 25th, 2013 at 05:04pm
  • selfish.

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    it's a sweet story, please update!
    June 25th, 2013 at 12:35am
  • stunning shenanigan

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    I really love this so far and was really excited to see that it had been updated. So unique and really refreshing!
    June 22nd, 2013 at 07:33am
  • dribblestheturtle

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    Wow, this is quite beautiful. :) I'm already quite excited what's going to happen next, cause your story's quite unique and a refreshment compared to all those stereotypical stories out there.
    June 20th, 2013 at 11:44pm
  • maus.

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    The characters are fleshed out well in this. It didn't take me long to know each character was, even without their name. I don't think we've been given either of the two main characters name, but I love the way you write them. It makes sense that the deaf girl would be a push-over, and I look forward to seeing her grow most. The whole feeling of the story is relaxed and quite, which is nice. I do think that there would be more mentions of her other senses, though I don't want to tell you how to write, it's just a suggestion because she is missing quite an important sense.
    June 12th, 2013 at 12:04am