My Personalities and I - Comments

Thanks for separating the paragraphs. Much easier to read and the story flows more smoothly.
Liza seems like the toughest of the group, and I like that she isn't afraid to kick butt.

I liked it. I feel bad for Eliza though, and I hope she tells Luke her "situation". He will understand and defiantly want to help.
But could you please separate the paragraph's a little more? It got a bit hard to read at times.
Other than that, really good and looking forward to reading more.

Okay, I am officially caught up.
I really like how Liza has 3 (?) personalities, that are not at all related to each-other. And I think that it is sweet that Luke has found his mate, even if she is a werecat.
I'm looking forward to reading more.
Oh could you please add a character tab? Thanks!

I like your new story. Pretty good so far.
I'm only on chapter 2 (I'll read the rest when I have more time - promise) but I like it so far.
My favorite quote from chapter 1 is:
to me she is like the mom that didn't abandoned me, the sister that didn't betray me, the father that didn't hate me, and the pride that didn't disown me.
Really good and creative.