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  • dawn of light

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    OH MY
    AND SO IT BEGINS
    THE MYSTERY
    THE RELATIONSHIPS
    THE EXCITEMENT

    after reading the first two chapters, I'M JUST EXCITED
    December 13th, 2018 at 04:16am
  • dawn of light

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    I AM READY FOR THIS
    November 7th, 2018 at 07:39pm
  • hiwagang hapis

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    Honestly, the Davis Effect, as a story, is a phenomenon all itself. It's a phenomenon because it's a story that starts out small but by the end, it's a story that you can't forget. I started reading it to pass time because I was waiting for the League of Legends Worlds but I got so into it that I forgot to watch the first phase of the game. That's how amazing your story is. It made me stop watching one of the most important games in my teenage life.

    The relationship between Tate and Fitz started out sour and I could see the development as the story progressed. I personally loved how into medicine Tate was because I can't be like that ever. Even if I want to be a doctor, I'm still not 100% sold to that kind of future. On the other hand, Fitz's relationship with his family is great. I love how it looks perfect on the outside but flawed in the inside. Their real relationship is far from perfect, in my opinion. Jones really made a huge impact to the family and strained their communication but that's to be expected given the circumstance. Because of that though, the far from perfect relationship they have is what makes them a great set of characters. Like dominoes, when one falls, all of them will. It started with Jones then proceeded to everyone else. I'm rambling now haha.

    You started out simple - having the adequate amount of description. You established emotional dynamics between the characters, making me immersed in your story. Chapter after chapter, my opinions about the characters would change slightly. That's how entranced I was with the Davis Effect.

    Anyway, I can't fully describe how I feel about your story but I can tell you that it's way past awe and amazement. I'm loving it so much. I'm already emotionally invested in the sequel.

    PS. In the back of my mind, I somehow knew that Jones was going to be the one behind the assassination attempt but I forgot it when I saw Tate and Fitz becoming all fluffy and stuff Facepalm
    October 3rd, 2015 at 03:24pm
  • lovelyhope

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    So my Mibba life has been hit and miss for the past year or so (probably longer than that since half my stories haven't been updated in like a year and a half *laughing/crying*), thanks to "real life" being crazy, busy, etc., but I have been making sure to stay up on your stories because you know you're one of my favorite writers on this site (all the way back to the John O/Maine story days lol). And I especially loved this story. It took me a while to get caught up on this, but I slowly yet surely did and I absolutely loved this story! It was so good and had enough twists and turns to keep me guessing, but there weren't so many that the story was unbelievable. I love Fitz and Tate and can't wait to hear a little more about them (and even more about Blake) in the sequel! Also, Michael B Jordan as Blake? Uhh yes, please haha.

    P.S. Sorry that this was basically just one big run-on sentence. My emotions are too much for my brain to handle right now.

    P.P.S. You look gorgeous in your profile picture! #HeyGirlHey #WorkIt
    September 7th, 2015 at 09:15pm
  • the quiet chaos

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    I just binge read everything that I missed and OH MY GOD I AM SHOCKED BECAUSE I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING AND I AM SO HAPPY WITH THE ENDING OH MY GOD.
    As always, your writing just blows me away Raveena! I am sooooo excited for this sequel you have no idea! AMAZING work you're doing here! :)
    August 26th, 2015 at 06:30pm
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    OMG THERE IS GOING TO BE A SEQUEL!!!! God that makes me so happy.
    August 24th, 2015 at 12:30am
  • tchalla

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    I can't wait for the sequel! :D
    August 23rd, 2015 at 11:41pm
  • peach kitten

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    I can't believe this is over. What a bittersweet ending. I loved this story so much and I'm so excited for the sequel!
    August 23rd, 2015 at 10:31pm
  • dawn of light

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    yeeee the sequel is going to be killer, i know it
    August 23rd, 2015 at 08:36pm
  • dawn of light

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    I spent a good hour with this.
    Fitz is Twitch (he's so ugggggh. my feelings. i love him)
    Tate is Cute

    Cant wait for the the last one
    August 21st, 2015 at 06:35am
  • silent hearts.

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    Thank goodness for Blake. Someone had to tell these idiots that they were in love this whole time.
    August 20th, 2015 at 01:52am
  • peach kitten

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    You hear that? That's the sound of my heart turning into mush because these two are killing me. I'm so excited for the last chapter but then I'm also dying because it's the last chapter.
    August 19th, 2015 at 04:24pm
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    FINALLY!!!!
    August 18th, 2015 at 11:41pm
  • tchalla

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    I can't believe that that this is going to end soon. The Davis Effect is one of my favourites on this entire site. Thank you for posting it. Also, ahhh! Fitz finally confessed!!! :D
    August 18th, 2015 at 11:38pm
  • peach kitten

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    I just caught up to this story and OH MAN NOW I REMEMBER WHY I LOVED IT SO MUCH AND IM SO SAD THAT ITS GOING TO END SOON BECAUSE ITS SUCH A BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN STORY
    August 10th, 2015 at 06:30am
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    I'm so excited to see what is going to happen at the end but I really don't want it to end.
    August 8th, 2015 at 02:23pm
  • n. josten

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    FITZWILLIAM EDWARD DAVIS, NO. YOU GET YOUR SHIT TOGETHER AND DECLARE YOUR LOVE FOR TATE. YOU DO NOT SAY 'BYE' AFTER SHE RANTS ABOUT HOW DIFFERENT YOU TWO ARE. YOU DON'T JUST IGNORE THAT SHE SAID SHE LOVED YOU ENTIRELY BECAUSE YOU'RE SCARED. WANNABE PRESIDENTS DON'T DO DUMB...nvm yes they do. Whatever. Fitz, stop being dumb. We all know you love her, too. Coffee yeah, yeah, he's going through a lot but c'mon. don't let her gooo

    God, I'm so eager to read the ending to this but at the same time, I'm sad it's almost over.
    August 8th, 2015 at 08:35am
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    I love that things are all coming together now. Jones' reasoning is so stupid but thats Jones for you. Loved the chapter.
    July 24th, 2015 at 01:53am
  • tchalla

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    I can never get over how amazing this story it. Every chapter is beyond amazing!!!
    July 23rd, 2015 at 11:19pm
  • Call_me_Dot

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    Ok, didnt see that coming
    July 10th, 2015 at 07:32am