This is really well written and it seems like a really good story. I like that you have it written from two points of views. And I can feel the emotion from your characters. There is a lot of meat to your chapters. Not just a cut and dry here is what happened. But you have detail and thought. I cannot wait to see where you take this. It looks like it is going to be a very good story.
This is really well written and it seems like a really good story. I like that you have it written from two points of views. And I can feel the emotion from your characters. There is a lot of meat to your chapters. Not just a cut and dry here is what happened. But you have detail and thought. I cannot wait to see where you take this. It looks like it is going to be a very good story.
This is really well written and it seems like a really good story. I like that you have it written from two points of views. And I can feel the emotion from your characters. There is a lot of meat to your chapters. Not just a cut and dry here is what happened. But you have detail and thought. I cannot wait to see where you take this. It looks like it is going to be a very good story.
So, I'm rereading this along as you repost them and I forgot how exciting this story is! Fitz and Tate make such a dynamic duo that they're absolutely perfect for each other and it's so freaking cute. I never got to read the last chapter you posted before you took it down, but judging from the comments, I'm assuming something huge happened and I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting.
I started reading this before you pulled down most of the chapters and I was about halfway through when I clicked the next chapter and it took me to the main page, so I was excited to read it all again! First of all, I absolutely love the depth you’ve given to every single character. Tate’s my favorite right now because she’s so passionate, but Fitzwilliam is also very charming – and their chemistry is perfect! I love all of the twists and turns, and I legitimately have no idea who was behind the shooting in the first place (though something tells me it might still be the senator’s rival). I really can’t wait to read more, you’ve got me hooked! :D
YO I read this when it was in the beginning stages and it was pretty stellar. And now that you have updated, I'm going to catch up (when I have time) and leave a more appreciating & fan-girling comment.
You updated!!!!!!! I can't wait to read what happens next. How will Fitz react? Does he tell her he feels the same way? All these questions running through my mind!!
HAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHA OOH SHIT BLYTHE HAS RUINED TATE AND I LOVE IT VERY MUCH MAYBE FITZ'LL MAKE A MOVE EVEN BETTER IF TATE MAKES ONE FIRST ;)))) i'm so excited though omfg too much pent up sexual/romantic frustration
When I saw the email that this story updated, I literally began to hyperventilate. Seeing it made my morning - it's almost 8am here haha. I really hope you update this soon!! :D