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  • life.ruiners

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    HOLY SHIT THAT TWIST HAS SENT ME WHIRLING
    July 10th, 2015 at 06:07am
  • swell

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    WOAH
    THAT WAS A TWIST I DIDN'T EXPECT
    WHAT THE FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
    July 10th, 2015 at 03:08am
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    Ohhhh wow. I didn't expect that at all. Another great chapter.
    July 10th, 2015 at 02:37am
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    Oh my god, oh my god. I totally wasn't expecting that. Shocked Oh my god, oh my god.
    July 10th, 2015 at 02:12am
  • tchalla

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    Woah man totally didnt expect that!!
    July 10th, 2015 at 01:38am
  • Mary-Alice White

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    This is really well written and it seems like a really good story. I like that you have it written from two points of views. And I can feel the emotion from your characters. There is a lot of meat to your chapters. Not just a cut and dry here is what happened. But you have detail and thought. I cannot wait to see where you take this. It looks like it is going to be a very good story.
    July 3rd, 2015 at 08:56pm
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    This is really well written and it seems like a really good story. I like that you have it written from two points of views. And I can feel the emotion from your characters. There is a lot of meat to your chapters. Not just a cut and dry here is what happened. But you have detail and thought. I cannot wait to see where you take this. It looks like it is going to be a very good story.
    July 3rd, 2015 at 08:56pm
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    This is really well written and it seems like a really good story. I like that you have it written from two points of views. And I can feel the emotion from your characters. There is a lot of meat to your chapters. Not just a cut and dry here is what happened. But you have detail and thought. I cannot wait to see where you take this. It looks like it is going to be a very good story.
    July 3rd, 2015 at 08:56pm
  • new york city;

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    ugh double post Facepalm
    July 1st, 2015 at 03:40am
  • new york city;

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    So, I'm rereading this along as you repost them and I forgot how exciting this story is! Fitz and Tate make such a dynamic duo that they're absolutely perfect for each other and it's so freaking cute. I never got to read the last chapter you posted before you took it down, but judging from the comments, I'm assuming something huge happened and I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting. Cute
    July 1st, 2015 at 03:39am
  • southpaw

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    I started reading this before you pulled down most of the chapters and I was about halfway through when I clicked the next chapter and it took me to the main page, so I was excited to read it all again! First of all, I absolutely love the depth you’ve given to every single character. Tate’s my favorite right now because she’s so passionate, but Fitzwilliam is also very charming – and their chemistry is perfect! I love all of the twists and turns, and I legitimately have no idea who was behind the shooting in the first place (though something tells me it might still be the senator’s rival). I really can’t wait to read more, you’ve got me hooked! :D
    June 30th, 2015 at 12:45am
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    Ohhhh my holy wow. Not at all how I expected this chapter to end. I really hope you update soon cause I want to see how this turns out.
    June 26th, 2015 at 06:54am
  • aubree james.

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    OMFG WHAT JUST HAPPENED!?!?!?

    The next chapter is coming out tomorrow, yeah??
    June 26th, 2015 at 06:31am
  • the dalliance.

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    YO
    I read this when it was in the beginning stages and it was pretty stellar. And now that you have updated, I'm going to catch up (when I have time) and leave a more appreciating & fan-girling comment.
    June 26th, 2015 at 05:56am
  • tchalla

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    You updated!!!!!!!
    I can't wait to read what happens next. How will Fitz react? Does he tell her he feels the same way? All these questions running through my mind!!
    June 26th, 2015 at 02:33am
  • vices

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    HAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHA OOH SHIT BLYTHE HAS RUINED TATE AND I LOVE IT VERY MUCH
    MAYBE FITZ'LL MAKE A MOVE
    EVEN BETTER IF TATE MAKES ONE FIRST ;))))
    i'm so excited though omfg too much pent up sexual/romantic frustration
    March 21st, 2015 at 08:11am
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    March 9th, 2015 at 08:55am
  • tchalla

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    When I saw the email that this story updated, I literally began to hyperventilate. Seeing it made my morning - it's almost 8am here haha. I really hope you update this soon!! :D
    March 9th, 2015 at 08:54am
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    This chapter has made me so excited for future chapters
    March 9th, 2015 at 07:18am
  • vices

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    I'M SO EXCITED FOR WHAT'S TO COME OMG
    FIRST OF ALL, TATE IS A FUCKIN HARDASS
    I WORSHIP HER
    SECONDLY
    DAMMIT, FITZ, JUST MAKE OUT WITH HER ALREADY
    January 5th, 2015 at 06:30am