The Davis Effect - Comments

Oh my gosh! This story is amazing, and so capitavting. I hope you update soon! :D

Ah I'm so excited that you updated!
I wonder if something is gonna happen where the visit backfires on them?
Oh man oh man OH MAN. Hahahaha
Can't wait for you to update this again! :)

Once again these two are working so well together. I love that their relationship is slowly building and they are really starting to trust each other. Can't wait to see what they do with this new information.

Three cheers for relationship progress! In that latest chapter, you can really see how far they've come. I love how slowly you've built their friendship, and that -- even now, it's just hinting at the potential of romance forming between the two of them. I also love how dynamic the Davis family is. I really am interested in what Jones and Fitz's relationship was like before the rape charges, and whether they were actually close at some point. And go you for bringing in the whole 'no means no' thing, and for having characters with differing morals.

I love Tate so damn much. She's such a refreshing character; she's confident but doesn't have an ego, she's sure of herself and she's ambitious. I can just tell that Fitz is starting to really appreciate that, and I can't wait to watch their relationship grow more.

As for the crime stuff... bring on the suspense and drama! I'm really eager for them to find more out. Usually I'd pick a suspect by now but I'm really not sure!

but yeah... this is super dooper cute and exciting and I can't wait for more!

I love the suspense you're building. The relationships, the way the characters act, everything that makes this story amazingly original. That, itself, is why I love this story so dearly. Words can't even describe how much I adore every little detail you put into this.

okay i can't get over how cute it is that Fitz calls her Doc like idk man i just the nICKNAMES UGH STOP IT
YEP FITZ HAS ALWAYS BEEN THIS HOT SO UH YEAH
MAYBE YOU SHOULD MAKE A MOVE ;))))
but YEAH, go Tate for basically wooing the Davis family all in one go!

These two are like electric, it's so beautiful. "Has Fitz always been so hot?" My heart quenched. I feel like a little kid waiting for their birthday or something to tear open a present. Every time you update I'm like "what are these two up to this time." And hey, you aren't losing your writing ability. The fact that you continue to write and not quit is what you should be proud of, seriously. I haven't written anything in over a year and I feel empty - only because I keep thinking my writing ability has gone down hill but you don't know unless you try. This turned out to be ridiculously long Anyways, much love to you!

YES. I love this story and i love tate and fitz and how well they know eachother and it's like real life awesome cuz they're like really good friends and stuff aghhh this is great i love this chapterrr

I think these two are such a great pair. I love the way they are with each other and how their relationship has evolved. Super keen for them to be back in investigation mode.

you are such a good writer oh my gawwwd
FITZTATUM IS SO MY OTP I CAN'T HELP IT
even if they stay platonic because of evanna and sleazebag joe, I'll still love them ok
buuuuut, i'm really digging blake and tate's whatever-it-is they got going on

ALL RIGHT TATE AND FITZ ARE MY LIFE OH MY GOD
THEY ARE SUCH A COMICAL PAIR THAT I'D ALMOST BE OKAY WITH THEM JUST STAYING PLATONIC
keep in mind the almost
but i mean, Evanna seems pretty nice and so does Joe, although tbh i don't quite recall them from earlier chapters????
my shit memory talking right there

GOSH DANG IT DO I HAVE ANOTHER OTP NOW GOSH DANG IT I DO

I love this lovely story! Fitz and Tate are perfect characters and I adore them!

I am totally loving this story. The relationship these two have is so great to read. Can't wait for more.

CAN THEY JUST MAKE OUT ALREADY?!
JESUS, THE TENSION IS KILLING ME HERE
but man, i am so proud of Tate
she's so gutsy and badass and i just love her so much and FITZ NEEDS TO STOP HE IS UGH
HE IS A BEAUTIFUL DISASTER

I AM TOO EXCITED ABOUT READING THIS BYEEE

oh god quintuple post I'm so sorry

Oh I forgot to mention that I actually reread this in the last half an hour and I love how the Davis family is flawed in a not obvious way. Like the way that they adopted Blake just to look "good" (or so rumor has it) wasn't like the main part of that paragraph, it was just a casual mention that's supposed to make you go "huh..."

Oh I forgot to mention that I actually reread this in the last half an hour and I love how the Davis family is flawed in a not obvious way. Like the way that they adopted Blake just to look "good" (or so rumor has it) wasn't like the main part of that paragraph, it was just a casual mention that's supposed to make you go "huh..."

Oh I forgot to mention that I actually reread this in the last half an hour and I love how the Davis family is flawed in a not obvious way. Like the way that they adopted Blake just to look "good" (or so rumor has it) wasn't like the main part of that paragraph, it was just a casual mention that's supposed to make you go "huh..."

Oh I forgot to mention that I actually reread this in the last half an hour and I love how the Davis family is flawed in a not obvious way. Like the way that they adopted Blake just to look "good" (or so rumor has it) wasn't like the main part of that paragraph, it was just a casual mention that's supposed to make you go "huh..."