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  • new york city;

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    Oh I forgot to mention that I actually reread this in the last half an hour and I love how the Davis family is flawed in a not obvious way. Like the way that they adopted Blake just to look "good" (or so rumor has it) wasn't like the main part of that paragraph, it was just a casual mention that's supposed to make you go "huh..."
    June 4th, 2014 at 08:28am
  • new york city;

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    Alright so can I say that I'm utterly in love with this story? The way that you built up Fitztatum is beautifully done and I'm literally squealing while reading this. Fitz better be jealous because he cannot get a better girl than Tate. THEY'RE PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER.
    June 4th, 2014 at 08:26am
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    Really glad you updated. I'm loving how these two are starting to really work as a team now. Looking forward to another update.
    June 3rd, 2014 at 05:59am
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    So happy you updated. Can't wait to see what the idea is.
    November 25th, 2013 at 07:27am
  • vices

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    omg this chapter was actually so entertaining
    DRUNK TATE AND FITZ HAHAHAHAHA
    sleazebag Joe omg
    i hope he was of decent age
    November 25th, 2013 at 01:44am
  • camelopard

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    I almost got up from where I sat and rejoiced with happiness.
    November 25th, 2013 at 01:23am
  • camelopard

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    That gif - oh my God.

    I absolutely love this story. It makes my insides warm and fuzzy.
    October 31st, 2013 at 03:14am
  • n. josten

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    Hi, so yeah, thank you very much for giving me this to read for the candy thing because oh my god. Oh my god.

    I am in love with this story. I won't lie, I've seen it appear on my feed from people I'm friends with recommending it but I disregarded it because I'm really not into politics at all. They bore me and I was like, "Eh." when I found out what this was. I really shouldn't do that, though, because I just fell wickedly in love with this story.

    I love Tate, I love Fitz, I love Blake, I want to smack Jones, and I even like Blythe. I can feel and see the character development already, which is fantastic because I am such a sucker for good character development. I think good character development is key, and I'm already seeing it here. I'm just in love! I love how Tate is so snoopy and Fitz really doesn't like her, and I would really like to see this magical side of Fitz that Tate keeps finding mentions of. Don't get me wrong, love him now but I would like to see 'nice' Fitz. I would love him then, too.
    I really don't think Doyle did it. I think he might be guilty of something but I don't think he did it. Or maybe he did and he's really good at hiding his true intentions but yeah, I'm not feeling it yet. Nothing adds up.

    You have no idea how much I'd like to find something wrong with this story because I'm actually peeved that it's so perfect, but that's the thing. It's perfect. There's not one single bad thing I can say about this story at all. I can't even find any mistakes to point out. You have perfected this gem and oh my god. Thank you very much.
    October 30th, 2013 at 01:18am
  • the quiet chaos

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    SUPER surprised that Fitz didn't try to get it in. I see some small character development and this makes me happy! :) Oh and I love how Tate is such a snoop. I hope she sets that picture of Fitz as his caller ID picture and he sees it one day and just like flips out.
    UPdate soooon!
    October 26th, 2013 at 05:13am
  • vices

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    FITZ DOES NOT LIKE ITALIAN FOOD ಠ_ಠ
    THAT IS NOT OKAY ಠ_ಠ ಠ_ಠ
    but he likes Chinese food so i forgive him (◠‿◠✿)
    Chinese food is in my blood
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    but omg does their new plan involve making out bc i'm ok with that too
    ALSO I SAW THAT GIF ON TUMBLR AND DIED A LITTLE INSIDE GOODBYE
    October 19th, 2013 at 07:51am
  • lovelyhope

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    They're both crazy. How can you not like Italian or Chinese? Crazy kids. I was so worried that Fitz was going to catch Tate snooping, but thankfully he didn't. I am a little disappointed though that she didn't find anything good on him lol.

    Also, I can't decide if you gif at the bottom makes me want to laugh or cry haha.
    October 14th, 2013 at 09:09pm
  • thewolf.

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    I thought he'd sleep with her, too! I'm very happy that he didn't. What she said about her dad being drunk and not home is suspicious but I feel like he didn't do it. I'm racking my brain for who might have, though! I feel like you'll make it be a huge shock!

    I love this story. I love your two main characters. I'd snoop on Fitz, too. I really enjoyed this chapter a lot. it gave a new view on Fitz and what he was like before this whole mess. Amazing job, as always.
    October 14th, 2013 at 04:37pm
  • colour me perfect.

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    Woot woot, an update! And an extra long one, which I love! At first I was thinking that Fitz was going to get himself in trouble with the questioning, but that Davis Effect must be pretty powerful because she talked about it all herself. lmfao

    I love Tate so much. I love how they interact and how she told him not to sleep with the girl. I have a really big feeling that Doyle is not responsible for the assassination attempt, but I have no idea who it would be if it wasn't him.

    I LOVE THIS AND I LOVE YOU AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. Arms
    October 14th, 2013 at 04:28pm
  • life.ruiners

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    That gif at the end made me happy and love you even more. I literally could read about Tate and Fitz arguing forever because it's so amusing. I can only imagine what he looked like in high school, please tell me he had braces? Hahah. Well, you better update when you can, because this is the best story on here <3
    October 14th, 2013 at 02:18pm
  • lullabies on sunday

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    omg you updated heck yes :D but anyway, i enjoyed the update, please update again lol
    October 14th, 2013 at 01:38pm
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    I really like how they work together. So glad you updated :)
    October 14th, 2013 at 07:59am
  • lullabies on sunday

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    tate + fitzwilliam= fate lol but anyways please update this because it's freaking fantastic.
    October 12th, 2013 at 06:49pm
  • saeglopur

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    I love this story. I'm glad I caught up with all the chapters. Tate is just UMF, and I love anything about medicine so this is just my cup of tea. I love the dynamic and the idea, its very fresh. I think you portray everything very realistically.
    September 22nd, 2013 at 01:28am
  • lovelyhope

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    Tate is so darn smart. Her advice was just spot on and Fitz actually listened to her! I'm so glad they're starting to get along. I mean nothing brings people together quite like investigating a murder attempt haha.
    September 21st, 2013 at 09:25pm
  • oxford comma

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    I'M FREAKING OUT THIS IS SO GOOD OH MY GOD
    September 20th, 2013 at 02:24am