Just Bent - Comments

@ maddiecaps
I am actually very tempted to write that....just need the right idea to come along. In the meanwhile, I might do a short story with Rick and Izzy.

Can there be a sequel where camile and shea have babies please. I miss her and i have caught baby fever from all the stories with people having babies.

@ midnightmssuki
Yes I reall do have to get it started.

@ Auntiebabs
I'm just sorry it took as long as it did to finish. I'm glad you stuck it out with me. And I do have a couple new things going on if you aren't already reading them.

@ defaultmemory
Now it's your turn.

Aw it was a cute ending.

Thanks for ending it and not leaving us hanging. As always, looking forward to more stories from you.

@ alwaysadreamer
One day I hope to add to Camille and Shea's story. One day.

That was a fitting ending for this. I mean, in the case of you being stuck and all. I like that it included a Camille blog post too. (Then again I just love Camille.)

@ Jayess
I had the BEST time at the Kings game and met a guy who knows Richie who regaled us with stories. I died. AND I think I came up with a solution for the dilemma I created with this on my drive to Raleigh.

I'd say don't obsess but I know too many writer-type people for that to be at all helpful! Instead, I hope you enjoy your Kings game!

@ Jayess
Yeah, Kaner was a complete lapse on my part. I don't know what I was thinking there. :(

At least I know what I'll be doing this weekend though.

Yeah, I went back and re-read love.sex.magic. and realized that's where Aria came from. But the Kaner in this chapter didn't mesh with the Kaner from the previous Camille-verse stories (and even previous chapters of this story), so I was much confused as I was pretty sure they weren't the same Kaner.

These things happen! You're not a bad writer, just a momentarily confused one. This is what happens when you write a zillion stories with the same people in them, it can be easy for details to mutate and jump story-lines. Continuity errors and such - that's what beta readers are for! And barring that, pedantic readers like me with an occasionally good memory for random details...

@ Jayess
Whoops! That's all I've got right now. I am a bad writer. :(

Seems I crossed this plot with a different one I'm also working on that also has Aria in it. And in connecting the stories, I slipped terribly with Pat in this one. I'll have to spend done time fixing this. Thank you for always keeping me on my toes.

wait, wait. Camille won't introduce Pat to girls at the all star game, he's picking up girls with Seguin there, and then a bit later he has a girlfriend who he's setting Amanda up to sit with at a game? And then Aria says that it's nice to see Amanda again? When did he get a gf? When and where did Amanda meet Aria the first time that it's nice again? I am all confused.

YES!!!! was so excited when I saw there was an update....looking forward to the next one!

@ midnightmssuki
Haha I'm afraid lol. I was supposed to see the coyotes play at the slanders Tuesday but won't make it on time. Boo.

@ defaultmemory
I understand crazy. My last two weeks were hell but hopefully this week gets back to normal. Meanwhile, I'm seeing the Kings play Friday. Maybe it'll inspire some new Mike and Jeff adventures just to drive you crazy.

@ Chicagocanada
Hopefully that will be sooner rather than later.

@ Sincerely-Angela
Me too!