Demons - Comments

  • @ HanerJoy
    I like Scarlett as well! She has spunk! Thank you so much I am trying to get back on my game with all of my stories but I am working on a one shot today called Mr. Sanders ;)
    August 11th, 2013 at 12:04am
  • I like Scarlett lol he should get his shit together and accept the help. Update soon I love this :D
    August 10th, 2013 at 11:59pm
  • Hot damn woman! Are you trying to give me a cardiac arrest?! Haha. I began reading this, sipping my tea and spat it all over the place when I read about the three girls pleasuring him. Man, so hot! Happy face

    I think he should take Scarlett up on her offer, I like her by the way, she's got balls! But I think he needs to let off a little more steam before he contemplates getting the help he needs unfortunately.

    More soon! :D
    July 28th, 2013 at 01:31am
  • @ theycallmerae
    I'm glad I could make your night my love and well duh that was my reaction to the chapter!
    July 8th, 2013 at 04:44am
  • @ Matt Sanders;
    Wow, what a comment. lol. I agree, he deserves a swift kick to the ass, not an orgy, dang men always getting what they want. And yes Maria is quite demanding isn't she...I kinda thought it was hot but thats just me lol. I think any girl would be in heaven as well bahaha. And I wish he wasn't so dang stubborn, she is trying to help. Poor Scarlett. At least she can hold her own. Thank you for the lovely comment, my lady. You made my night.
    July 8th, 2013 at 04:38am
  • He sauntered towards her?? :O, does he think that he will get her with that?

    Hahah he would startle me and then glasses would go crashing on top of my head, oh god I don't know if I would want that.

    Yeah what brings you here so early Matt? Oo she hates me, you can tell by that look that she gave him! Now he is telling her these things and it seems like it always happens to a bartender, they get an earful of the patrons life. Oh yes use that sarcasm, let it drip off your tongue scarlett!! lol. Oh it is supposed to mean what it means Mattie!!

    Oh wow, give it to him! Sock it to him yep!! That is what I'd do...well at least I would try to do! I don't know if I could be mean to him!! lol. Well goodbye jerk and she shouldn't say she is sorry she was telling the truth!

    Ooo surprise him?? I wonder what it is!! Oh yeah I'm sure he was able to tell that he needed it, although he needed that swift kick in the ass, I would think he didn't need three girls!!

    So he knows one of them and the others are trainees I take it?? Well I don't know if he would be since he is quite big, or so we hear :P! Oh wow now she is using them and dang!! Well dang she can be quite demanding but of course in that business I guess she can be and I can see why.

    Well any guy would be in heaven with three girls with him in bed and watching two go at it while one is doing it to him? Damn! Oh now they all have different places on his body damn!

    I'm surprised he wasn't exhausted after that, I mean I know I would be especially if I was the one that he was actually fucking! Mmm!! Lol and well she still shouldn't be sorry for doing that and I'm sure he has heard worse!

    Well at least she knows what it was like and she just wants to help him and hmmm....wonder what he is going to do with that and of course he is going to be stubborn!! DAMN IT MATT!! She wants to help you live!!
    July 8th, 2013 at 04:24am
  • @ HerNameIsAlice
    Haha yes I plan on doing regular updates now! I'm updating Nanny again tomorrow!

    @ Heaven_syn_gates
    He is! He needs a wake up call I think :) thank you for the comment!
    July 6th, 2013 at 05:23am
  • She is so sweet and he's a dick
    July 6th, 2013 at 04:40am
  • Matt's an ass.. M-ASS. Hahaha. I'm so glad you updated this story! Geez, girlie!
    July 6th, 2013 at 03:40am
  • @ Matt Sanders;
    Thank you dear! And I guess I can understand Zacky but I think I would be more likely to take Jimmy's approach.

    @ RachTheBat_
    Yes Matt is a stubborn asshole lol I agree I think Jimmy has the right idea. Matt needs to be kept calm. I hope they can too!
    June 23rd, 2013 at 09:56pm
  • I see Matt's still being a stubborn asshole huh? No surprise there really. Zack has a right to be angry with him yes, but that's not going to help Matt in the long run. Jimmy's right, he needs help and support not a shouting match with his best friends, that's only going to make him drink more.

    Hopefully Jimmy and the rest of the band can talk some sense into him, maybe then he can start to get his life back on track and get things sorted with Val.

    Good update! More soon? :D
    June 23rd, 2013 at 04:28pm
  • Hmm I really do love this and I love how Zacky is being all mean to him!! He needed it!! :)!! Anyways I really love that you're growing as a writer too!! I have a feeling that things are going to get more complicated now!
    June 23rd, 2013 at 12:28am
  • No probs
    June 22nd, 2013 at 11:00pm
  • @ Heaven_syn_gates
    Thank you! I have to admit I was not as confident with this one. I know where I am going with this story and in my mind I just wish I was there to the excitement already haha
    June 22nd, 2013 at 07:28pm
  • Awesome update
    June 22nd, 2013 at 07:19pm
  • @ theycallmerae
    Oh no, it's perfect just the way it is! Seriously, I really like it!
    I'm doing the happy dance that a new chapter will be posted soon :D
    June 15th, 2013 at 05:24pm
  • @ RachTheBat_
    I'm glad you like it! I am like halfway done my next chapter, I wanted to have it up yesterday but this week just got vry hectic. See and I think I could make some huge improvements on my smut I feel like it use to come easier to me and considering there will be lots of smut in this one I need it to come easier again haha.
    June 15th, 2013 at 04:43pm
  • I've had this bookmarked for a few days now, silly work getting in the way of my reading! Lol
    I really like the layout, it looks dark and foreboding, totally fits with the summary.

    I just love a good Matt story where he's basically a bad boy. I love a mean and moody Sanders, sexy as hell! I'm half way down the first chapter and there's smut already, I love it! XD

    Gee Matt, you could have stopped her from leaving you there pal. Why are almost all men so damn stubborn? Mine is no different lol.
    Oh oh oh oh! A pool table? That's like my biggest fantasy! Thank you for the wonderful visual Happy face
    Love it so far, very well written and the sex scenes are hella descriptive Lick
    More soon! :D
    June 15th, 2013 at 04:33pm
  • @ JimmySullivan
    Thank you for reading and commenting! My other story is all sunshine and rainbows I needed a break from all the unicorns so I needed to make a story full of Bad Matt and smut bahaha. Oh and a kick ass bartender :P
    June 5th, 2013 at 04:10am
  • Wow, I actually feel really terrible for val. What a douche matt is! BAD MATT! BAD! I don't care if you are hot with your sexual ways, you snap out of it and get some help you two timing horsecocky man whore!!!!!!
    June 5th, 2013 at 03:51am