Heavy Hearts - Comments

  • Rockabella

    Rockabella (200)

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    I really like this so far! Keep updating!! :)
    June 8th, 2013 at 05:10am
  • I'd.Be.Your.Tears

    I'd.Be.Your.Tears (100)

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    aw i really liked this! you seemed to capture Ashton's frustration with the insomnia really well!
    thank you for entering my contest! :)
    June 2nd, 2013 at 10:58pm
  • AshyMandy

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    I really enjoyed this. I love your use of description. Ypu have your first follower. I look forward to the next chapter. My name is Ashton as well and has insomnia
    May 30th, 2013 at 03:29pm