Jar of Hearts - Comments

  • psychotic secrets;

    psychotic secrets; (1400)

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    I really like even though this is fan-fiction, I can understand it perfectly well. The idea was well thought out too. How you set it up was amazing. Like how you used flashbacks to tell the story, that's really clever. Even better in the ending he got a new girl and grew away from that bitch. Really good.
    June 24th, 2013 at 10:30pm
  • Marinesister92

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    Really great story, i was glad that it wasn't so rich into the NASCAR that I couldn't understand what was going on. The flashback was a great touch to the story.
    Check the thread to see who the winners are
    -S
    June 19th, 2013 at 04:51am