June 23rd, 2013 at 01:17am
Let It Happen - Comments
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Wow, so I just read the first chapter. Just like one of the people that commented before, your story really IS easy to read and it has just enough details to help us envision what we need to, to connect emotionally with the story. I like this one, although I've only read one chapter. I'll recommend it so I hope you continue!June 10th, 2013 at 05:45pm
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Can't help but like Gustav I'm afraid >.<June 4th, 2013 at 08:01pm
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@ Joli Fransykes
I knew what you meant, thanking you
May 31st, 2013 at 09:00pm -
I wrote 'easy to read' but meant to write that it makes you want to read on... really draws you in.May 31st, 2013 at 08:53pm
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I wrote 'easy to read' but meant to write that it makes you want to read on... really draws you in.May 31st, 2013 at 08:53pm
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Depressing start (lol), but really good, easy to read and I look forward to reading more.
:)May 31st, 2013 at 08:51pm
I completely agree with everyone else, it's incredibly easy to read and catches your attention immediately because you are expecting the worst. You make the story very easy to get emotionally attached by how you explain feelings with just enough detail. Overall, good work!!