Not Just A Rat - Comments

  • Aisdais

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    This is an interesting concept for a story. I really like how the humans are described and how they are considered the pets instead of the rats. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there but nothing that can't be fixed easily. Great start. :D
    June 2nd, 2013 at 01:02am
  • chelseycate

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    I think you have a good storyline going, it's pretty interesting. I'm not really drawn to the layout though. It isn't bad but it's not for my taste really; maybe a little plain. But over all pretty good, didn't see but a few mistake grammatically. Keep writing! It was good!
    June 1st, 2013 at 10:22pm
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