June 2nd, 2013 at 01:02am
*here from comment swap*
I think you have a good storyline going, it's pretty interesting. I'm not really drawn to the layout though. It isn't bad but it's not for my taste really; maybe a little plain. But over all pretty good, didn't see but a few mistake grammatically. Keep writing! It was good!
This is an interesting concept for a story. I really like how the humans are described and how they are considered the pets instead of the rats. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there but nothing that can't be fixed easily. Great start. :D