You are literally the only person to write a story with a big girl as a love interest and not have negative things to say. Shanna is actually like a real person and not the expectation of the world. I commend you on a job well done.
God, I know it's only two chapters but I am in love with this story! It's so vivid to me. And I like that! I can hear the voices and see everything. I love it. I really truly do.