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  • Amysteriousglint

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    @Maddi; Thank you so much! I'm so used to writing in 1st person, so me writing in 3rd kind of feels foreign to me. Im about to update once again! So enjoy!!! :D
    August 17th, 2013 at 12:02am
  • Maddi;

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    Your writing style is absolutely beautiful. I love the way you describe Gwendolyn's first day experience, and that's exactly what I do on the first day. It's sometimes better to just stay in the background a bit. It's definitely much safer that way, and I think Gwen has a pretty good plan for how to handle it.

    I like that she got to make a new friend and Rosa seems like she's going to be a very important part of this story. I really like it so far and I can’t wait to see what happens in the coming chapters and what will go on with Gwen’s mom!
    August 16th, 2013 at 10:14pm
  • mgn.

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    I actually love this
    August 16th, 2013 at 07:13pm