In All Your Perfection - Comments

This was beautiful and amazing. The words just flow so well and I especially love "It hasn't yet, but I'm terrified it will." It's like a distant fear in the back of the character's mind, as are some of the others, which are almost erased by the beauty and emotional connection of the two protagonist in the story. This is amazing. Love it.

@ laredo.
@ fascination.
Thank you both so much. I appreciate it greatly

Not only do I love this layout, but I love the meaning behind the side picture and how well it correlates with the story itself.

Moving on to this amazing story. Okay, I'm definitely in love. The man/woman she speaks of sounds so fantastic and amazing and it feels like she becomes the truest and most amazing form of her/himself when she gets around him/her. And I find that beautiful. I know the exact feeling. I love being around people who make you feel like you're invisible and one of a kind and who can comfort you like no other and I know thats the kind of person the narrator is talking about.

On top of this lovely plot, your writing is magnificent and all of your words flow so nice and neatly together; i love it! This entire this was so cute and fun to read; thanks so much for it!

Wow, this story really hit me straight in the heart because I can relate to the idea of having somebody perfect but being afraid that you could lose them at any moment.

I like the length that you made this because it fit. It wasn't too long or too short, it was a perfect length and I liked that. It was really sweet to read and I thought all the things the narrator had to say about their love was quite adorable and I also didn't want them to lose their love, because they cared about them so much. This was beautifully written. I loved it.

@ tom marvolo riddle
Awe shucks that comment made me smile. Thanks <3

Awe this is beautiful :) I loved it and surprisingly I felt like it was the right length which is surprising because I usually go for the longer drabbles but this was definitely a risk worth taking.

I loved the minimalism of the description because sometimes being over descriptive is too much but what you’ve done makes me wonder and almost picture the memories of the two together and I like it!

My favourite thing is the description at the beginning;

‘When I first met you, I could have sworn you were an angel from heaven. You had broken wings, but by the way you presented yourself, not many people would have figured that out.’

All I can say is “Awe!!” and I don’t know why :) Loved it and I’ll look forward to more of your drabble hehe!

@ ImtheDoctor
Why thank you very much

This is very beautiful. :) I really like it.