Soaring Hearts - Comments

First off, layout? True Love was my favorite series and that was my favorite episode, so well, yeah. Dying. Secondly, there is so much action, but it's not sudden or overpowering. It's real and calm and well, fantastic! It's so natural and so well written. I wish I could give you a better comment than his. You give enough background story as no to overwhelm but enough to get the ball rolling. I just love this, to be honest. Great job!

Awe, I liked this! I was hoping it would end that way, and it did, so that made me happy.

The layout was lovely, and it matched the story really well. It wasn't all bright and flashy and didn't take away from the story, but it went with it really well.

I liked how realistic this seemed as well, even thought it could be considered a bit cliche, you added your own touches and enough emotion to make it your own and make it unique. The emotions between the two girls was really lovely, and you really made me feel all the emotions that you got across in the story.

Nice job!

Awh oh my gosh. So many feels. Okay so i'll start with the layout.

I liked it very much and it really fit with the story. I always seem to like layouts more with one color that stands out and I like how you picked red, I use that color a lot I think. The grays work together well and it all looks nice together, so that's a plus c:

Starting to read this story I felt really connected to Victoria. There was so much emotion and it was so familiar I was kind of thinking geez, just tell my whole story but you know. I love how you did very well with getting the emotions through to the readers/me at least. It was lengthy for a one-shot for me to read but I think it was worth it, it was very well written.