rewind - Comments

I always enjoy stories that are played in reverse. You did an excellent job with coherency - I could tell that the memories were in order, there was no author intrusion to tell the reader exactly what was going on which made the piece more stimulating.
I had to wonder how to pronounce Ales (ails or alice) until seeing his whole name, you could put out in the character description page or not -it just made me curious and I thought harder about the story.
Thank you for sharing :-D