A Lifelong Promise - Comments

I was so excited to discover this story. I stayed up until 2AM reading it when I had to be up for 6am for work. I've got quite the crush on Paul so this was a really big,exciting thing for me to find! Can never have enough Paulie in my life! lol <3 You did an outstanding job!

@ in.the.clouds
Haha! I see your point - but it was more of a fresh start thing for them. I can only imagine how messy a situation like this would be so I'd wanna get away too, regardless! But it worked out perfectly for them...plus I really liked the idea of ending it with him kind of telling the story to guys who really didn't know what happened. I can't explain it lol but I'm glad you read/liked it

I know it's been over a while, but I'm still so curious. I love the way it ended, and I'm so happy she's with Paul. But just out of curiosity, how come you had Paul and Clare leave? I thought for sure when James was traded to Nashville that it would be the perfect solution.

I'm looking forward to reading your next story. :)

To be honest I wasn't sure what was going to happen especially when he sent her back to James but the way you've written this I couldn't be more certain that her and Paul were fated. A truly beautiful perfect ending to a complex beautiful and perfect story. You've done it again and I can't wait for more!

Wonderful ending! It was a perfect ending to a perfect story!

Nice update, ended on a happy note. I'm the James person, though, so of course I would have preferred your original plan, but this was well-written and I looked forward to the updates. Good luck on your next story!

Wow great ending. I am so happy it worked out for Paul and Clare like you couldn't believe. It's Amazing

I'm more than happy everything worked out for Paul and Clare. Was interesting to read that this story changed direction for you as it went on. Definitely something that made the story even more exciting.

I know it's been a long time coming for you to end this story but think you did a great job with it. While I'm sad that this story is finished I loved reading it and will miss getting an alert when it's been updated.
I would love to see what you have in store for another story whenever you get the chance to write another one, you're a fantastic writer :)

Good job! Great story!

So he ended up with the Devils? Nice. Great story, sad to see it end, but can't wait for your next ones!

Thank you so much fir this beautiful chapter, beautiful story. I'm glad Clare didn't stay with James!!! Can't wait for your next story!!

I miss this little family!

@ Melissa1590
I'm sorry! Gah! I'm working on it, I'm working on it! I miss it too, haha! Thanks for checking in! I'll update soon!!

I hope you update this story soon! I miss it!

I'm happy James stepped up, Clare needed that closure. I will be excited to read the last chapter even though I don't think I'm ready for it to end. You've done a great job with this story :)

Love that james stepped up! Guess they got the closure they wanted! Can't wait for more!

That was so great.

I'm glad James stepped up and was a better man!

It was so emotional to watch all of them go through such a roller coaster if intense feelings. Glad there was some closure for all of them.

Is it bad that I was actually tearing up?? I'm so emotionally invested in this story, well I have been with all your stories so I expected nothing different, especially with a baby involved. I know the last chapter wraps everything up but you always keep us guessing till the end. Can't wait to see what you have in store and that new story!!

Welcome back :)