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  • hockeylove719

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    I love writing Geno! I love the language barrier and how it can make him even more presh!!! He can be a challenge though because I caught myself doing it once and I caught it in your story too--You want to use his accent in dialogue, but you start writing the way you usually do, how you speak, proper English or close to it...and then it bounces from accented Geno to a Geno who all of a sudden speaks perfect English..that's common though, I've seen it a lot and, like I said, I do it myself. It's hard to even catch when you edit too!!
    I LOVE that Neal introduced them because he's my fav lol. I also like that you made him shy...Idk what it is, but I like to picture him shy even though he's probably not.
    I also liked that you referenced the song multiple times.
    The winners should be posted on the contest page in a couple hours, so you can check that out :)
    July 8th, 2013 at 01:33am
  • midnightmssuki

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    @ Ladyfiaran
    I just want to hug him all the time!

    James might get one sooner or later. Hopefully sooner. Mr. Green
    June 14th, 2013 at 02:52am
  • Ladyfiaran

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    LOL, Geno is indeed a cuddly Russian teddy bear and I'm a Spanish speaker myself so I got it Mr. Green Geno and Serena are such an adorable couple and he's right, James needs a girlfriend Wink Great job Very Happy
    June 14th, 2013 at 02:13am
  • midnightmssuki

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    Thanks @ FLSweet82!
    June 13th, 2013 at 07:11am
  • FLSweet82

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    I LOVE IT!!!! LOVE GENO
    June 13th, 2013 at 05:18am
  • midnightmssuki

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    @ Ladyfiaran
    I just love him but man, I found him really hard to write. One more update to this, probably tomorrow or the next day. :)
    June 13th, 2013 at 02:24am
  • Ladyfiaran

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    That was so sweet, Geno is a big ol' cuddly Russian teddy bear Mr. Green Great job Cool
    June 13th, 2013 at 01:56am