I love writing Geno! I love the language barrier and how it can make him even more presh!!! He can be a challenge though because I caught myself doing it once and I caught it in your story too--You want to use his accent in dialogue, but you start writing the way you usually do, how you speak, proper English or close to it...and then it bounces from accented Geno to a Geno who all of a sudden speaks perfect English..that's common though, I've seen it a lot and, like I said, I do it myself. It's hard to even catch when you edit too!! I LOVE that Neal introduced them because he's my fav lol. I also like that you made him shy...Idk what it is, but I like to picture him shy even though he's probably not. I also liked that you referenced the song multiple times. The winners should be posted on the contest page in a couple hours, so you can check that out :)
LOL, Geno is indeed a cuddly Russian teddy bear and I'm a Spanish speaker myself so I got it Geno and Serena are such an adorable couple and he's right, James needs a girlfriend Great job
I LOVE that Neal introduced them because he's my fav lol. I also like that you made him shy...Idk what it is, but I like to picture him shy even though he's probably not.
I also liked that you referenced the song multiple times.
The winners should be posted on the contest page in a couple hours, so you can check that out :)