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  • Thatmom

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    That was HOT!!!
    October 28th, 2013 at 03:36am
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    They are so good together. It's fun to see Sid let loose. Helena brings out the best in him.
    October 2nd, 2013 at 07:11pm
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    You use the word 'reckon' fairly noticeably in your writing. In North America, it's a regional word, not universally used; it's not in my (West Coast) daily vocabulary nor have I heard any Canadians use it. I have to say it throws me out of the story whenever I see it.

    Also, commas go inside the quotation marks, not outside.
    September 7th, 2013 at 03:05am
  • Thatmom

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    Loving the story!! Kaner is such an ass!!
    September 1st, 2013 at 06:04pm
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    Love the scenes from London. I lived there for a couple years. Love Portobella market.
    August 20th, 2013 at 05:52pm
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    Love this story:)
    July 25th, 2013 at 09:06pm
  • ninjadinosailor

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    This story is cute!
    The only thing is I don't speak French, so when you used it, I had to use Google Translate, which was fairly accurate...
    The conversation reminded me of my dad :P
    Loving the story! <3
    June 30th, 2013 at 08:29am
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