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  • BlueEyedAngel2

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    No problem. I almost didn't say anything because I didn't want you to think I was telling you how to write your story but I was like what can it hurt it's only a suggestion lol. I know it'll be awesome with or without it I just think it almost seems like there's more going on on his side than we can see from her pov.
    Anyway still loving your story. Can hardly wait for the next update.
    Ang
    July 1st, 2013 at 01:14pm
  • tracicita.marie

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    @ Writing-luvr11
    I'm reviewing everything to make sure it makes sense and there aren't any typos. I'll probably post the next chapter tomorrow some time. I know I'm a bit slower with updates, but it's because I'm a slight perfectionist and I want it to be perfect for everyone who reads it.
    July 1st, 2013 at 08:44am
  • Writing-luvr11

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    UPDATE NOW!!! Please? :)
    July 1st, 2013 at 07:20am
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    @ BlueEyedAngel2
    That's a good idea. There might be a spot coming up where I could put that in. Thanks.
    July 1st, 2013 at 04:14am
  • BlueEyedAngel2

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    I think it would be cool to hear it from his pov.. You know see how he's feeling whathe's thinking and maybe have him flash back to the night she just told us about. That's just me though.
    July 1st, 2013 at 01:37am
  • BlueEyedAngel2

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    Thank you and no problem, I love getting comments on my stories, so when I see a wonderful one like yours that is so pitifully neglected by the fans I feel I can't stay silent. I got way too few comments and because of that and the difficulty writing them on my phone I gave up on most of them. Writing one hardcopy though lol. That's another prob of mine it flows better from a pen and I have too many ideas and get bored withone so I start a new one our go back to a really old one. Lol.
    Anyway enough with my crazy ramblings.
    Ang
    June 24th, 2013 at 12:58pm
  • BlueEyedAngel2

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    Thank you and no problem, I love getting comments on my stories, so when I see a wonderful one like yours that is so pitifully neglected by the fans I feel I can't stay silent. I got way too few comments and because of that and the difficulty writing them on my phone I gave up on most of them. Writing one hardcopy though lol. That's another prob of mine it flows better from a pen and I have too many ideas and get bored withone so I start a new one our go back to a really old one. Lol.
    Anyway enough with my crazy ramblings.
    Ang
    June 24th, 2013 at 12:58pm
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    @ BlueEyedAngel2
    You are so sweet. Thank you for the feedback! Your comment made me smile! I hope all your dreams and wishes come true!
    June 24th, 2013 at 06:32am
  • BlueEyedAngel2

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    Let's see what I think; I love your story, it's so real. I can total put myself in her place and see things pan out the exact way you write her. She is as real as of it was me or one of my bffs.. Awesome job! I applaud you.
    How I'm feeling; very tired, it's 11pm here, and I have a 1 month old and a 2 1/2 year old, plus a man child I call my husband lol you'd think a 21 year old could take care of himself once in a while, and maybe even occasionally help with the kids but uh no not my hubby.
    And what I want for Christmas; I don't really know a house of our own would be excellent, or a little bit of cash I don't have to tell my hubby exactly what I spent it on, that would be nice.. Oh! To have my book and screen play published! That would be a dream come true! maybe a laptop and internet. Our books lots and lots of books.
    Only because I thought it was original to ask.lol I prolly said way too much but I saw you only had one comment and your story deserves WAY more so I wanted to give one, also I'm getting a condition I call sleep drunk (when you're so tired you act drunk), so I just said whatever popped into my head.on that note I bid you ado.
    Much love and keep up the good work,
    Ang
    June 24th, 2013 at 06:06am
  • Writing-luvr11

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    Really good!! Please write more!!! :)
    June 22nd, 2013 at 05:09am