Meetings and Much Much More - Comments

Thanks for the advice. I may not be able to write for a while because my laptop broke and my brother is taking collage courses so he is on the computer most of the time, but i promise i'll update as soon as i can.

This is amazing update soon please

Hello there. :) I love this idea, your summary is very catchy, I like that. And the idea you have going on here is very interesting! I would love to know how Luna and Andy "hit it off". The way you make them interact is very interesting and I'm sure will add/help your plot.

I have only some things to point out, there aren't many "grammar" or "tense" issues. I do, but grammar and tense aren't easily noticed. You're writing is good, the only thing I would add, is you should really have punctuation at the end of your quotes or dialog. Example.

“Shit are you okay I didn’t see you there”

It should really have a period or comma at the end of it, every quote should. Most end in periods, just like.
"Shit, are you okay? I didn't see you there." <--- this is with some added punctuation. But with keeping it the way you have it. Shit are you okay I didn't see you there. There should be something at the end of it, it makes it look better. It can be anything, too. An exclamation point, question mark, comma, period, semicolon, colon, anything of choice, but really something.

Another thing, that I'm not sure if you're currently working on or what, but most stories have something called a 'Layout" with their stories. It's not a bad thing that you don't, but I was just wondering if you were aware. Many people find making them difficult, I do, sometimes. But I'd be more than happy to make one for you, if you wish. If so, message me :D

Lastly, I see you have outfits to show who was wearing what, you can keep the url there, but something that many Mibba users picked up, was how to add a link into a story/author box/blog/comment, ect. And I shall teach you, if you don't know already..

All codes start off pretty easy. I used spaces, so that the codes wouldn't actually work. But when you type this yourself, do not use spaces. & You what ever you want in the place, where the words go.
[ i ] w o r d s g o h e r e [ / i ] ( These are italics.)
ex. hello there
[ b ] w o r d s g o h e r e [ / b ] (This is bold.)
ex. hello there
[ u ] w o r d s g o h e r e [ / b ] (This is underline.)
ex. hello there

There are more simple ones, like crossing and adding other things, like pictures or whatever. But how to add a link. It's a lot like the simple ones. Once again, I will use spaces to the codes won't work, but to show and then once I will. :)

[ u r l = the link or URL will go here] the name of what the link is [ / u r l]
ex. Luna's Outfit
ex. Luna's hair

That's it. :) Hopefully I helped some. But I love what you've got here, love it love it love it. :D Update soon darling.♥

oxox - Morgie .