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  • squidgyyo

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    Update soon please!!
    November 8th, 2014 at 01:13am
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    Update soon??
    September 8th, 2014 at 04:32am
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    Update soon?
    March 18th, 2014 at 08:12pm
  • Lady.V.

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    It would be awesome if you kept up with this. XD
    December 23rd, 2013 at 02:19pm
  • squidgyyo

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    update update update update update update update update update update update update update
    December 14th, 2013 at 08:51pm
  • squidgyyo

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    Update soon?????(:
    October 12th, 2013 at 07:14pm
  • Albluerose

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    awww!!
    September 9th, 2013 at 04:32am
  • CptLollipop

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    @ Crash Thrusts.

    @ INKEDA7X
    Aw thanks so much to the both of you, sorry I didn't reply sooner.
    September 2nd, 2013 at 08:41am
  • Crash Thrusts.

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    Okay, I just found this story today and I absolutely adore it. I'm on chapter 21 and too tired to read the rest, but I will soon! Theo seems so cool. I like him already. Cute
    August 30th, 2013 at 09:21pm
  • INKEDA7X

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    SSOOOO amazing!!!! love it. such a good story! cant wait for more :)
    August 22nd, 2013 at 11:17am
  • CptLollipop

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    Ha ha, oh my god! I hadn't thought about that when I wrote it but now it's all I can think about!
    August 22nd, 2013 at 12:51am
  • Write.with.Love

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    " in the way his eyes narrow on a shirt on the floor like he could blow it up with his mind."

    This reminded of the movie Accepted when the guy wanted to learn how to "blow shit up with [his] mind." Hahahahaha! And I don't like Jeremy. He's your typical high school jackass for now.
    August 22nd, 2013 at 12:49am
  • Write.with.Love

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    I didn't know she was gonna have to meet his family! *nerves, nerves all over*
    August 20th, 2013 at 05:58am
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    @ Albluerose
    Sorry! My computer broke, but my dad is letting me borrow his. I'm working on a contest entry right now, but I'll try to have the next update by tomorrow.
    August 20th, 2013 at 03:59am
  • Albluerose

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    I have waited for this update! lol I love it and can't wait to see her reaction.
    August 20th, 2013 at 03:46am
  • Albluerose

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    I have waited for this update! lol I love it and can't wait to see her reaction.
    August 20th, 2013 at 03:46am
  • Heynow1

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    I love this story so much!
    August 18th, 2013 at 06:28pm
  • CptLollipop

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    @ Albluerose
    Oh my god thanks! I'll fix that as soon as I can! I'm on my mom's computer right now, mines like totally broken :C

    @ Write.with.Love
    I want to have her be a character you hate at first and then come to like later, but we haven't gotten past the hating part yet.
    August 17th, 2013 at 07:23pm
  • AndreaKatelyn

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    Loved it, seems like Theo is acting a little sketchy, Sadie is going to be a big issue. I can just feel it, update soon, I love this (: <3
    August 17th, 2013 at 02:49am
  • Write.with.Love

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    When you asked if you should put another girl in the mix, I wasn't expecting her to cause so much trouble. LOl.

    Reading with caution. Wink
    August 17th, 2013 at 01:25am